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    HuaWei signed a deal with Russia<s>n</s>

    Many countries are working to launch a 5G-network, and HuaWei is one of the few companies to make 5G-network <s>complatial</s> compatible equipment. The American government blacklisted HuaWei as a threat <s>in the</s> to national security, but the Russian government made a deal with HuaWei to develop their internet. The Chinese president Xijing Pin fina<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">l</s>lised the deal when he visited<s> in</s> Russia last month.This is the most struck [? I don't understand the intended meaning of this sentence - 'the most struck agreement' doesn't make sense in English] agreement which is worth more than 20 billion [you need to include a currency].

    As a Chinese <s>people</s> person,I am proud of HuaWei <s>comany which</s> for being <s>is</s> one of the the few <s>company</s> companies in the world that can provide <s>the high </s> this sophisticated technology <s>in the world</s>. Many young people <s>perfer</s> prefer to use Apple's iPhone in the past few years, they <s>thaught</s> thought it <s>is</s> was the <s>Apple mobile whith the</s> best quality. <s>even</s> They are even willing to sell their kidney to buy a new Apple<s> IPONE</s> iPhone. What's more, it also represents <s>they are the people who own the wealthy</s> wealth, to own an iPhone. However, w<s>h</s>ith the developing technology of HuaWei today, more and more of the younger generation have changed <s>to</s> their<s> chocies</s> choices.
    From this <s>phenonmen</s> phenomenon, we can <s>know</s> see that the government should put more effort into <s>the</s> technology. It will be good for our country's development in the future.

    Well done, this is a great piece of writing. I have offered corrections where relevant and comments below :)

    The main things to work on:
    <ul><li>Punctuation relates to the word before the punctuation mark and has a space after, for example the comma I have used comes after the word 'after' and then there is a space before the next word 'for'</li><li>You will need to use an article for some nouns, e.g. the government, the president - there are many helpful articles on this online to learn more</li><li>The final sentence of your first paragraph, I wasn't sure what your intended meaning was so didn't correct this. If you want to try and explain the meaning I am happy to help</li></ul>

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    June 13, 2019
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    Hi there, A public art collection is a group (collection) of pieces of art (e.g. paintings, sculptures etc.) that is open to the public. This is not transportation, it is cultural or even could be considered in hobbies or leisure. Let me know if you need more help understanding :) Beca
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    June 13, 2019
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    Hi Britta,

    My suggestions on your sentences are below. Hope you find them helpful :)

    1. In 2019, hundreds of ambitious teenagers want to take part in the new show of American Idol. They strive/are striving (you can use either suggestion here, both are correct) to be the best and hope that the talent show judge Simon Phillip Cowell will spot (he spots their talent is present tense, he will spot their talent is future) their talent during the next four months of the show.
    2. However, not every candidate gets/is given/will be given/could be given (you could technically use any option, the most natural would be 'catches a break') a break in the show.
    3. After a never-ending/endless (as he does eventually burst into the room, neither option is perfect here - you could try 'after a long time' or 'after what seemed like an endless amount of time') time he burst into the room.
    4. Billy got/earned (had - a person has an experience rather than getting an experience) a rather negative experience.
    5. I used to play the piano <s>since</s> when I was a little girl. - this means you did play when you were a little girl but do not play now, you could also say "I have played the piano since I was a little girl" which expresses that you played as a girl and do still play now
    6. After an hilariously long amount of time the audition finally got off the ground. However, I didn't please the <s>jury</s> ("judges" at an audition, a jury is in a legal court case).
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    June 3, 2019
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    Happiness

    This is the 25th day.

    The pursuit of happiness ranks first for me. However, I am often lost on the path to grow and I dwell on negative emotions, which leads me to divert from my pursuit for happiness. In order to change, I am striving to improve the quality of my life as way of being closer to my values and my dreams.

    In the meantime, I believe I can make it.

    I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers (including Greg).
    Goodnight.
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    June 3, 2019
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