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    Essay #447 "Growing up in the Countryside" 08.04.19

    The place we are living live in defines our live life in to a great degree and therefore people try to find a place to live which will match them. Basically, there are two types of people;: the first prefer busy city life, the latter - calm and slow countryside. In my opinion, countryside is a great choice, especially for people who want to raise their children.

    First of all, the countryside can provide people with a much more quality environment, which has a highly positive effect on people’s living standards conditions.This aspect has become especially crucial as the situation with our environment has worsened dramatically. The countryside can provide people with much cleaner air and water and improve their lives in this way.

    Another point is that in many cases children are less affected by negative aspects of big cities, like crime and drugs. As the countryside is less exposed to these different negative factors, this makes the live living there much safer. In many cases this is the main reason why people try to move there when they have children, as they want to ensure them with the best conditions for them their children to grow up.

    Finally, the countryside provides people with a close-knit community which is great for raising children. In big cities people in many cases are less friendly and neighbors seldom try to maintain good relationships with each other. At the same time the countryside creates a much better opportunity for people to create a friendly community.

    To conclude, in spite of the fact that big cities can provide people with much many more opportunities than the countryside, the latter is a better place for children and to lead a calm family life. That is why many people try to move there when they have children and this is a really good choice for young families. People should organize their priorities right and make choices which would be the best for their children and family.


    Great essay!

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    Helsinki

    I want to answer one strange question I've been asked for a couple of weeks. Guys were really curious about why was I going to Helsinki and what was I going to do there. Nearly everyone asked me this.
    First I started thinking that there was something wrong with this place. But there was nothing wrong. Everything was perfect! People were polite, the streets were clean and the food was delicious.
    My second thought was that maybe for most of the people this kind of holidays is boring. There weren't wasn't a lot of sightseeing places like the Coliseum or the Louvre or anything else other exiting things. But there is calm. And safety and happiness. Because of The people who I've noticed were contented with their lives and the truth is, you're can't pretend that you're happy if you're not. I saw grandmas chilled out in the restaurants and chit-chatting chit-chatted merrily. I saw a young punk hugging his conservatively dressed granny at the train station. It felt like all the people enjoy jogging and cycling. I saw only three people with cigarettes and I didn't see anyone drunk.


    What a sweet description! It makes me want to visit Helsinki now :)

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    April 8, 2019
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    If I won the lottery

    If I won the lottery I would take the lump sum payment. For starters, I would give some money to charity. Then I would pay off my debts. After that I would take my family on a nice vacation. Finally, I would invest the rest of the winning wisely; however, I would live in the same house and work the same job because I like them.

    This is very good. The last sentence needs to be split after "wisely", either with a semicolon or by beginning a new sentence. This is because "Finally, I would invest the rest of the winning wisely" and "However, I would live in the same house and work the same job because I like them" are two sentences, not one.

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