If I won the lottery
If I won the lottery I would take the lump sum payment.For starters I would give some money to charity.Then I would pay off my debts.After that I would take my family on a nice vacation.Finally, I would invest the rest of the winning wisely however I would live in the same house and work the same job because I like them.
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If I won the lottery
If I won the lottery I would take the lump sum payment. For starters, I would give some money to charity. Then I would pay off my debts. After that I would take my family on a nice vacation. Finally, I would invest the rest of the winning wisely; however, I would live in the same house and work the same job because I like them.This is very good. The last sentence needs to be split after "wisely", either with a semicolon or by beginning a new sentence. This is because "Finally, I would invest the rest of the winning wisely" and "However, I would live in the same house and work the same job because I like them" are two sentences, not one.
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