Rainy Day
After a brief spell of sunshine, Shang Hai, the city
in which I live, I live in is rainy again. This morning on my way to work I watched a Python class on PAD as I usually do, and suddenly thought about the meaning of life. When I was a little girl, my dream was to become an astronomer but, when my grandfather
was deadly painful with suffered a painful death from cancer, my dream changed to wanting to be a doctor.
turned to becoming a doctor. doctors . But
when I grew up , I didn't become either a doctor or an astronomer. I am wondering who I am and what I want.
am I , what is a dream ,What do I dream about? A happy life
live with living with a
the man
who I love and
have a
lovely baby girl? I don't know. I just wonder about myself and the person I was supposed to be
during for the last twenty-seven years. But life goes on. What I should do is just try my best, and one day when I look back, I will
not have any regrets.
A general note - there should be no spaces before punctuation. In other words, commas, periods, question marks, etc., all follow directly after the word that they are written after. For example: "After a brief spell of sunshine," NOT: "After a brief spell of sunshine ," Also, try not to overuse commas. You can see how many that I have removed.
I was able to understand you perfectly, though, so good job!