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    April 2, 2019

    I packed my luggage today because I need to leave my home town. My university is near located next to my prefecture, so it will take only about two hours to get there.
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    April 2, 2019
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    A Day at Work

    I've been working  full-time for five years in full-time employment. I'm a staff member of the real estate department of my  at a company that has dozens of properties such as office buildings, apartments, and shopping malls.

    Our office hours are from starts at 9 am and finishes at  to 5 pm, although most employees often work overtime. I spend most of a workday answering the various inquiries from business partners and residents who rent our buildings. Also, making a pile of preparing documents for lucrative contracts and frequent meetings are is one of my important but if arduous duties.

    My office is on the first floor in of a neat office building that my company owns. In the building, there are comfortable rest areas for workers where classical music is played softly in the background. I sometimes head to the areas during working to take my mind off  it for a while and recharge my batteries.

    Honestly, I have somewhat difficulty getting on well with my old-fashioned senior colleagues and arrogant customers who often drive me up the wall, but I'm surviving thanks to the amenities of the office building where I work.
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    April 2, 2019
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    I did was a Guest Speaker in preschool class.

    It was a wonderful day!
    Because I was able to share a great experience with my children.
    I think that I want to talk to tell you about that.

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    My son goes to an international preschool.
    They are studying about "Profession"s now.
    They were also beginning to be interested in their parents' professions.
    I used to be a "Graphic Designer" so I decided to teach the children how to draw a picture.

    But what kind of picture should I draw with children?
    I came up with a good idea.
    Cherry blossoms blooms between late March and April in Japan.(That is now!)
    Enjoying cherry blossoms is an old Japanese custom.
    There are many foreign children so some children don't know the custom.
    So I decided to draw a picture of cherry blossoms!

    First,
    I made in over 70 handmade Origami sakura stencils.
    Do you know "Origami"?
    Origami is a one of Japan's traditional paper-craft art.

    Next,
    I put pink paint into a spray bottle.

    Finally,
    I made a huge canvas of 4 meters x 2 meters!
    I painted a tree in the middle.

    I’m I was good to go!
    Did you know what to do? Can you guess what for?
    We are going to fill the tree with cherry blossoms!

    That day, I was so nervous.
    I was worried that whether the children would be happy.
    But I was a worrywart.

    The children began laying out the Sakura.
    And the each student got a spray bottle filled with pink paint and began spraying over the Sakura...
    It already looked stunning, but then now, we peeled off the Sakura!
    When the children saw the outcome, they were speechless at first ..and
    then so excited!
    It was truly a sight so breathtaking..we felt like we were standing under a big Sakura tree!

    The children were happy and I felt very happy.

    Thank you for reading a long sentence.
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    April 2, 2019
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    Barbeques<tagaki10 day4=""></tagaki10>

    We cook beef on the barbeque. We cook sausages on the barbeque.
    We don't cook tomatoes on the barbeque. We don't cook rice balls on the barbeque.
    I want to cook chicken on the barbeque. I want to cook shrimp on the barbeque.


    Your text is grammatically correct.

    Barbeque should be spelled barbecue.

    Bon apetit!

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    April 2, 2019
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    Tim Tam

    International  Foreign candies  candy(candy is a non count noun like rice or money so no s at the end) always surprises(it's candy  so it's not plural) me. Every time I try  some them, I find new tastes that Japanese candies don't candy doesn't have, this Australian chocolate snack "Tim Tam" is one of them./a good example
    The biscuits are very crispy and the filling is creamy. It takes me to the a sweet wonderland in no time!!
    Also, it's so  much fun to choose from  so many varieties.
    Well, long story shorts, the name "Tim Tam"s sounds just  are so cute great!


    Your English is very good, the mistakes are minor and your vocabulary is extensive.

    "Long story short" shows you have an advanced knowledge of expressions. Mind that you use the phrase just before summarizing all you have said before- so you do not add more info after that(in this example you do not add that you also like the name Tim-Tam but rather that you like Tim-Tams in general)



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    April 2, 2019
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    My Trip During the Winter Vacation (1)

    I visited the a monastery in Cyprus. I forgot its name because my tour plan had been charged(changed?!?) on the previous day.  I would have written the day before, but it's no biggie

    I searched for the name and I found out that it its name was "Holy monastery of St. Neophytos." It's natural for me to have forgotten the  a name like that.
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    April 1, 2019
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    001_1904

    Yesterday we all knew  learned/heard the name of  the new Japanese calender "Reiwa(令和)"
    I wonder what's like times be are coming.


    But personaly promblem is about my job. I'm so tierd worring about many things!

    Personally my problem is my job. I'm too tired to worry about much else!

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    April 1, 2019
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    April 1, 2019
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    Writing Practice (Could anyone please check my entry?)

    The new era name will be announced in a half an hour. A large number of Many people in my country are looking forward to getting it. Some people have freely guessed some new original names using two kanji(s) which have with meanings of good luck, peace, rests and so on. Our domestic local/national media have been constantly reporting about it since this morning. Today will  be one of the historic days in my county.
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    April 1, 2019
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    Take a break

    We take turns a breaks in turns at work.

    A: My break is done. Should I switch a break with  tell someone else to take their break now?

    B: We are busy now. Let’s take a break when things quiet down we settle down.

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    April 1, 2019
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