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Tim Tam International candies always surprise me. Every time I try them, I find new tastes that Japanese candies don't have, this Australian chocolate snack "Tim Tam" is one of them. The biscuits are very crispy and the filling is creamy. It takes me to the sweet wonderland in no time!! Also, it's so fun to choose from many varieties. Well, long story shorts, the name "Tim Tam" sounds just so cute!

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Foreign candy always surprises me. Every time I try them, I find new tastes that Japanese candy doesn't have, such as this Australian chocolate snack called "Tim Tam". is one of them. The biscuits are very crispy and the filling is creamy. It brings me to the sweet wonderland! in no time!!! Also, it's extremely fun to choose from many different varieties. Well, long story shorts, the name "Tim Tam" just sounds just so cute!

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Great job!

I'm eager to try Tim Tams!

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Tim Tam

International  Foreign candies  candy(candy is a non count noun like rice or money so no s at the end) always surprises(it's candy  so it's not plural) me. Every time I try  some them, I find new tastes that Japanese candies don't candy doesn't have, this Australian chocolate snack "Tim Tam" is one of them./a good example
The biscuits are very crispy and the filling is creamy. It takes me to the a sweet wonderland in no time!!
Also, it's so  much fun to choose from  so many varieties.
Well, long story shorts, the name "Tim Tam"s sounds just  are so cute great!


Your English is very good, the mistakes are minor and your vocabulary is extensive.

"Long story short" shows you have an advanced knowledge of expressions. Mind that you use the phrase just before summarizing all you have said before- so you do not add more info after that(in this example you do not add that you also like the name Tim-Tam but rather that you like Tim-Tams in general)



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Thank you, Rocco♪
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Perfect.

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