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long time no see
How time flies.Tomorrow is June 26,the but the day last year,my friends and I had to say"goodbye"to each other,to say "goodbye" to our campus,to say goodbye to "me-a student".
Almost one year,I have not connected with my them,even in their birthday,I feel sorry.However,I love them,my dear friends,I know their life are full of so many problems and puzzles that i can't help them so much.I choose that i turn up when they need me,yes ,i am here.
Years have passed already.As a teacher,i am happy that i have recognized my lovely students.In fact,i don't like to be a teacher,i think my students are my motivition to work,but i doubt how i can go on this way.i wanna be free,do what i like.
I have a problem is that i can't say out what is the life i most want to,even i know,but i don't know the way to get.Maybe i will use my whole life to find the answer.
When i see you again,i just want to say "long time no see".0 votedJune 25, 20100- long time so see How time flies.Tomorrow is June 26,the but the day last year,my friends and I had to say"goodbye"to each other,to say "goodbye" to our campus,to say goodbye to "me-a student". Almost one year,I have not connected with my them,even in their birthday,I feel sorry.However,I love them,my dear friends,I know their life are full of so many problems and puzzles that i can't help them so much.I choose that i turn up when they need me,yes ,i am here. Years have passed already.As a teacher,i am happy that i have recognized my lovely students.In fact,i don't like to be a teacher,i think my students are my motivition to work,but i doubt how i can go on this way.i wanna be free,do what i like. I have a problem is that i can't say out what is the life i most want to,even i know,but i don't know the way to get.Maybe i will use my whole life to find the answer. When i see you again,i just want to say "long time so see".June 25, 201020
你好!除了直接修改,我会给你一些讲解的,希望对你有帮助。
天啊!!!
热得要命<strike>了</strike>
什么鬼天气,在泰国热得要命<strike>了
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今年天气真怪,很少下雨,一般这个<strike>时间</strike>时候天天就下大雨了,(时间:短的的时刻。比如:5:00PM, 时候:范围比较大,比如:冬季、夏季 )
没有下雨就没有水,所以我国<strike>家</strike><strike>发生了</strike>的问题就是水不够用,
这是很大的问题,但是<strike>天天政府们</strike> 政府官员天天都在吵架吵架吵架,非常无聊,(政府是一个区域的一套机构,不能加“们”)
<strike>反正</strike>不过我们国王他很<strike>同心也很</strike>关心这个问题,所以他自己花了不少钱为了<strike>要做假下雨</strike>人工降雨,我很感动<strike>我的国王</strike>。(或者:我的国王令我感动。)
国王万岁 万岁 万万岁
很不错啦!至少我可以懂,加油!
0 votedJune 22, 20100rithklang's notebook entry: Jun 20, 2010
你们好!我来中国已经半年了,有点儿习惯这儿的生活了。我来这儿之前,连一句话汉语也不懂,中国人说什么也听不懂。呵呵。。。我刚开始学汉语的时候,觉得汉字差不多都一样,太难写,太难记了,但是现在我不这样想了,我越学越有兴趣。(1)我现在能跟中国学生交谈什么什么的,关于我国家的生活和我的家庭,感到很兴奋。我又能跟中国学生出去学校外面玩儿,买东西,他们顺便给我介绍好多地方,哪儿地方我以前都没听说过。所以我一听到他们说,就想要求他们陪我去哪儿玩儿。哈哈。。。不过有好多地方跟中国历史有关。(2)我哪儿不太了解了,因为我的中文现在能懂的太少,所以不能懂的很难的情况了。虽然我去过,但是我对那些地方还有兴趣,不能忘记了。希望我汉语快能够用,快能懂得清楚,又能去哪些地方玩儿。哈哈,这次到这儿吧。。。希望有人给我改正错用的地方。):
rithklang,你好!看了你的这段文字,算是很通顺流畅的,在中国口语中已经足以表达清楚自己的意思了,不错哦!现在我来说说我找到的问题吧!
一、在汉语里面,一句话只能讲一个意思。(1)里面前半句是讲你自己,后半句发现没?你是在说别人。所以这时候就要在前面加上“别人”,修改后:<font color="#0000ff">我现在能跟中国学生交谈什么什么的,别人关于我国家的生活和我的家庭,感到很兴奋。记住哦!
</font>二、第(2)个句子就有点乱了。嗯,我尽量按照你的思路跟你改改吧:有些我不太了解,因为我现在能懂的中文还太少,所以不能懂很难的。
好吧!就到这儿吧,希望能对你有点小小帮助。祝你学习愉快!0 votedJune 20, 20100Three years ago,I heard a song named"what is youth"from a Japanese singer.I got caught in the voice and the lyrics.Now this question reminds me of that song.I want to enjoy it with you.
what is youth
what is a youth? impetuous fire.
what is a maid? ice and desire.
the world wags on.
rose will bloom
it then will fade
so does a youth.
so do-o-o-oes the fairest maid.
comes a time when one sweet smile
has its season for a while...
then love's in love with me.
some they think only to marry,
others will tease and tarry,
mine is the very best parry.
cupid he rules us all.
caper the cape, but sing me the song,
death will come soon to hush us along.
sweeter than honey and bitter as gall.
love is a task and it never will pall.
sweeter than honey...and bitter as gall
cupid he rules us all
what is a youth? impetuous fire.
what is a maid? ice and desire.
the world wags on.
a rose will bloom
it then will fade
so does a youth.
so does the fairest maid.0 votedJune 20, 20100
