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Greetings from the Philippines! I'm Jawo I have (2) two years of experience on a multicultural environment through my work at my University's International Affairs Division. we have strong connections between different universities in Japan. That exposure was one of the reasons for my deep interest to study the culture, the history and the language of Japan My first visit to Japan was through the JENESYS 2.0 (program under JICE Japan International Cooperation Center). I have a Jtest exam this coming May 12.. If you're fluent in Japanese and studying english, call me and let's help each other.
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Mari
Japanese
May 11, 2019
We tried the test questions a lot as much time as we have. Jawo is getting better and better :-)
Mari
Japanese
May 2, 2019
Very passionate student. Our time had passed so quickly. I will send you the summary later. Thank you for taking a lesson with me!
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    English composition:Agrees or disagree Topic is:Violence on TV and the Internet should be centered

    I agree with the idea that violence on TV and the Internet should be centered (?) and I have two reasons to support this opinion.

    First of all, that violence on TV and the Internet increases the rate of crimes. For example, the murders and crimes that hurt people with weapons are influenced by these movies and videos.

    Similarly, the bad effects on children are the most serious problem. These violent movies and videos are lead teaching children to the bad behaviors as they grow old adalts.  These behaviors are then passed on to their children and are also passed on to their children. I think It's a bad cycle.

    It's true that the TV and the Internet are very convenient. in that Anyone can search and learn about anything at any time.

    However, if you mistakedon't know how to use them, it will lead to bad results. Especially, for children, it's difficult to they have difficulty on distinguishing what's right and from what's wrong information. Therefore, I believe that violence on TV and the Internet should be centered (?).

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    Please correct it!!


    NOTE 1: I think that Centered is not the right word for your message. It gives a strong positive Idea of patronizing violence on TV. 

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    May 6, 2019
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    Listening the musicsListening to Songs

    It takes an hour when I to go to my workplace.
    Because I feel that it is so long long time,The travel time feels very long. I always listen the to the musics inon my SD card.(My car has an device that can read it)
    My native language is Japanese, but I choose to listen the musics in English to English songs, which are covered Japanese pop musics (This is weird. do you wish to say:I choose to listen to Japanese pop songs covered into English songs?). I listen themto them to for enhance my listening ability in English. It is very interesting and easy to listen the lyrics because I previously know Japanese lyrics.I can't necessarily listen the English lyrics Since the lyrics was previously in Japanese, it became easy to understand and interesting. Knowing the meaning of the lyrics was no longer necessary.... (^_^;)

    It takes an hour to go to my workplace. The travel time feels very long. I always listen to the music on my SD card. My native language is Japanese, but I choose to listen to Japanese pop songs covered into English songs. I listen to them to enhance my listening ability in English. Since the lyrics was previously in Japanese, it became easy to understand and interesting. Knowing the meaning of the lyrics was no longer necessary.

    NOTE:  music is a sound, or the study of such sounds, organized in time while 
    song is a musical composition with lyrics for voice or voices, performed by singing.
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    May 6, 2019
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    Yogurt candy

    The Meiji Yoguretto is a yogurt candy that has been sold for many years in Japan. It has a mild yogurt flavor with a slightly fizzy sensation. If you are lucky, you can may find a happy smiley face on it.

    NOTE 1: it is well written.
    NOTE 2: I chose to omit some redundant words.

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    May 5, 2019
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    Mt. Satsuki

    I went to the park and zoo of Mt. Satsuki, Ikeda castle. We walked from Ikeda station to there. There was an uphill road and It felt hot. And The weather is sunny and I didn't need a coat. So We enjoyed full cherry blossoms and had ice cream called icecrin. The taste was nostalgic for me.and then we enjoyed the zoo. There were many animals from Newzealand. Although I've lived in Ikeda for three years, I didn't know here is free. <(I didn't know you can go there for free)

    My version:

    We went to the park and zoo located at Mt. Satsuki, Ikeda Castle. We walked from the Ikeda station. There was an uphill road and it felt hot. The weather was sunny and i didn't need a coat. We enjoyed full cherry blossoms and had ice cream called icerin. The taste was nostalgic for me. We also went to the zoo. there were many animals from Newzealand. We have enjoyed it. I've lived in Ikeda for three years and yet i didn't know you can go to these places for free.

    Note 1: I've added or removed sentences.
    Note 2: it's a good practice to make every sentences on a paragraph as parallel as possible. to make it easier to understand.

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    May 5, 2019
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