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    20100622: Unhappy feelings The iron entered into my soul. I’m more unhappy than before. What on earth is wrong with me? Sitting on the forum when it’s sunny out? I do prefer a heavy raining to a sultry weather. So hateful weather! I feel so tired but I can’t sleep. I can’t count how many days like this had already lasted. But I still have to keep a smile on my face in the every daytime. I am listening to music for touching my soul by myself everyday while I am walking alone on the way to home or to work. Day after day, time went by from my hand, just like a drop of water which is on the point of a needle drop into the sea.
    June 21, 2010
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    Who can tell me why I can't submit my compasatation any longer? Since I finished three compasatations.It always shows "You have reached the daily limit on notebook entries".Thanks, Hisun. But I still cant submit my compasation in the next day.
    June 20, 2010
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  • Corrected

    “月份”是一个月的统称,“月”是某个具体的月份。
    如:三月份——表示3月的这个月份;
           三月——表示March
          三个月/3个月——几个月份累加总数为三个月

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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    4. 时态的表达:

             最近我很喜欢看蜗居系列的电视剧。——正在进行动作。
             最近我看了蜗居(这部电视剧)。——过去完成动作。
             最近我很喜欢看蜗居(这部电视剧)。——过去到现在的持续性动作。

    说明:“喜欢”是持续性动作,“看”是瞬间动作。“了”、“过”、“着”都是时态助词,接在动词之后。

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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    3. 标点符号的正确使用:

       1)句号:表示陈述句末尾的停顿,表示一句话/一个意思已经完整表达。注意句子表达时,应避免“当断不断,一逗到底”的错误。
       2)(感)叹号:表示感叹句末尾的停顿。①用来抒发某种强烈感情。②语气强烈的祈使句末尾也用叹号。如:你给我出去!③语气强烈的反问句有时也用叹号。如:我哪里能和他比呀!
       3)逗号:表示句子内部的一般性停顿。
       4)顿号:表示并列的单字、词语或短句之间的停顿。部分特殊情况:
    a. 较长的并列成份间可不用顿号而用逗号。如:这翻滚的麦浪,这清清的河水,这大雁的歌唱,使年轻人深深陶醉了。
       b.并列作谓语、作补语时,并列词语之间不用顿号,而用逗号。如:这个故事讲得真实,生动。
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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    2. 连接词的正确/习惯使用,如:“因为……,所以……”vs“……,因此……”;“先……,再……”;

    但是我觉得有点困难,因为我的中文水平不够好/这么臭!因此我急需提高我(/自己)的汉语水平。
    但是我觉得有点困难。因为我的中文水平这么臭,所以我急需提高我(/自己)的汉语口语水平。
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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    Good job. I think you should pay more attention the following points:

    1.
    个别词语在不同句子中的区别应用,如:“现在”vs“目前”、“创立”VS“发展”、“工作””vs“事业”、“月”VS“月份”;

    “现在”与“目前”的意思非常接近,但它更含有“当前”急于做某事的意味,“目前”更强调在一个阶段想做某事的意思。
    现在我想要发展自己的事业。

    目前我想要创立自己的公司。

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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    让我们聊天吧

    大家好<strike>,</strike>!让我介绍一下我自己<strike>.</strike><strike>..</strike>……

    我两年前来到上海学习国际工商<strike>. </strike>。我四月份就毕业了<strike>,</strike>。现在想要<strike>创立</strike>发展我自己的<strike>工作</strike>事业。

    但是,我觉得<strike>比较</strike>有一定困难,因为我的中文水平这么臭! <strike>所以</strike>因此我急需<strike>要</strike>提高我的汉语口语水平。

    如果你看到我在网上,尽管与我联系<strike>我聊聊</strike>!最好,我们<strike>会</strike>先花30分钟说英语,<strike>之后</strike>再花30分钟说汉语。

    我对流行文化<strike>,</strike>、生意<strike>,</strike>、运动都有兴趣。最近我很喜欢看<strike>了</strike>《蜗居》系列的电视剧。

    <strike>反正</strike>总之,我期盼着跟你们聊天!
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    June 19, 2010
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  • Corrected

    Good job. I think you should pay more attention the following points:1.


     

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    June 19, 2010
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  • Posted
    What shall you do if you are cheated some money by a person? One foreign cheat lied to my friend that his visa was overstay so he had to go back to his hometown Nigeria to solve this problem. He has no else friends in Chongqing. He had no enough money to buy round trip tickets. He promised he will return money when he came back Chongqing. Because they are neighbors and knew each other for months, she believed him and lent money to him. As time flies, another several months passed, he lied to her again and again for reducing her suspicion till the lease of his apartment was terminated in the end of May. And then his phone was out of service and she had known nothing about him any more. She thought he must left Chongqing to other cities. One day her friend told the poor girl whose heart has big broken that he have seen the cheat in a club. She had no idea what she should do with him. But her friends think he should be taught and return her money. Then, what is your suggestion? If you are her, what shall you do?
    June 19, 2010
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