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    Please have a look at this LETTER and leave your feedback. This would really help me to improve.

    You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
    Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
    Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
    Say how your work could be done while you are away
    Ask him/her help in arranging it

    Dear Sir/Madam
    I am writing to express my interest in working in within our New York branch for the next 6 months.
    My husband is being transferred for a project to New York by his company to work on a project. It is a six months project and I want to accompany him there. This could also be beneficial for our branch as I would be able to learn that about the new software that our head office has  just started using. If sent to New York I could  learn about the new software that from there and train the rest of our staff when I return home. after I come back.
    I have been working with Mr. Sushil from for the last 5 years and he has assured me that he would take care of my on-going projects here as he already has all the details. Also, I could help him from the head office whenever he requires though  via phone and email.
    Therefore, I kindly request that you to arrange my temporary transfer to our head office by getting obtaining the necessary approvals from the concern manager concerned there. Also, please could you initiate my visa process at the earliest opportunity so that I could can join the branch by the next month.
    I look forward to your reply.
    Yours faithfully
    Ritika Jain



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    May 9, 2019
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  • Corrected

    Haircut day (please correct)

    Today, was the haircut day. I went for a haircut.
    I do it  go every two weeks - My hair grows fast.
    I phoned to make an appointment but no one picked up.
    I went there anyways. Fortunately, there were no customers.
    I parked my car across the street because there is no parking at the hair salon.
    I was sat comfortable comfortably  in the chair and the hairdresser asked me - how would you like me to cut it?
    I replied that I'd like only the sides trimmed/ a trim on the sides parts. ( both of these would be correct)
    My visit was brief and not expensive.
    It took me a less than 10 minutes. 
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    May 8, 2019
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  • Answered
    As Stephen says or if greeting someone you know such as family/friends/neighbours you may say things like: 'Hi/hello, great to see you!' 'Come right in' 'Make yourself at home' "So glad your here" Hope this helps, Suzanne
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    May 8, 2019
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  • Answered
    Hello, In your sentence 'such' is being used to mean 'like this/that' so instead of such you could say- (WITH) Running costs like this it only makes sense for families with at least $100m-150m. Using 'such' is also perfectly correct too! Hope this helps, Suzanne
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    May 8, 2019
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  • Answered
    Hello, I would say that this is a 1st conditional clause - as we use the 1st conditional to express real/possible situations and their results - If + simple present and will/going/to/may/might + infinitive (base form of the verb) It's ok to change the clause around but in your example you have: If (it is) properly managed, the T>T sector can continue to be.... Hope this helps, Suzanne
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    May 8, 2019
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