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从前/很久以前/很久很久以前(很久很久以前一般用在童话故事的开头)，曾前（怎么说once upon a time？），有一个十岁的男孩，叫麦克，住在纽约市附近的郊区。他的背景很普通，像大部分美国孩子一样。夏日天的一天，纽约市普尔菲特郊区里所有的孩子都放假了，他们都感觉很轻松也清爽，因为夏天之际再也没有写作业对灵魂的压制因为暑假来了，再也没有写作业的负担。
这一天，十岁的麦克突然有一个想法欲望：把跟最好的朋友们都叫上联系起来，夜晚中在晚上一起到森林深处骑自行车，玩一玩。
可是，他丝毫都不知道（我把 “一点都” 这个句型改为 “丝毫都” 了。。。后者自然吗？可以，挺好的。），夜晚的森林深处藏匿匿藏（隐藏匿藏有什么区别？）着什么东西。。。要么是鬼神，要么是丫头（丫头 = 女孩子，颇可爱、一点都不威胁，这个说法太过于庸俗吗？不知道你要表达什么，丫头似乎不合适），他即将面对的东西将会改变他的整个人生。。。等到下一篇文章就能看后面发生了什么；）此处你想要表达的意思应该是藏匿。藏匿和隐藏的区别，我觉得1，隐藏更常用；2，藏匿有点贬义，比如藏不好的东西。而隐藏是中性词，可以用来表达藏好或者不好的东西。
0 votedMarch 11, 20190写文章练习
我已经一个星期我没有练习汉语了，。好像拖得太久了。好像很长的时间。在italki我看到学英语的学生常常写一些篇文章。我很佩服羡慕他们的态度，。我也很尊重他们的努力，我知道这件事需要勇气来继续为了继续是勇敢。 写一篇文章比较难，。但我可以复习词汇，虽然也可以练习hsk考试的题目问题都可以，但是自己写一篇文章就比较难。为了进步，你需要承担风险。
On week without practising chinese already seems like a long time. On italki I see students of English who often write texts. I envy their attitude. I respect their wffort, I know that to continue you need courage. Writing a text is hard. I can review vocabulary or answer exam qüestions but writing a text is harder. In order to progress you need to take risks.那就多写几篇吧。：）如果觉得写文章难，复习词汇和看考试题也是很好的！
0 votedMarch 11, 20191一篇用汉语练习造句的文章 二零一九年二月三日 第一个
达到 Dádào achieve; ontain; reach
倒 Dào upside down; inverted; indicating something unexpected; indicating contrast; to pour; to pressing s.b for a answer
真正 Zhēnzhèng real; genuine; really; indeed
肯定 Kěngdìng affirm; confirm; approve; regard as positive; be sure; have no doubt
关心 Guānxīn be concerned about; show interest for; care about
以 Yǐ with; be means of; according to; in order to; so as to
宋先生终于达到了他买一个房子的目的。“达到目的”是正确的表达，但这句话很奇怪，如果一定要改的话可以说：宋先生终于达到了他的目的：买了一个房子。
他很聪明，倒不喜欢看书。这句话没错，但是在这个情景里“倒”的意思不明显。可以造句：我不说你就算了，你倒怪起我来。/ 我忙里忙外累死了，你倒好，躺着睡起觉来。
他总是愿意帮助我。他是一个真正更的朋友。
他肯定地会很高兴再见到你。
可惜很多人对保护环境毫不关心。
我会以造句这个方法来学习这些新的词汇。以...来...，这样通顺一些0 votedMarch 3, 20191- Drink Bottle I bought a new drink bottle today for my son. I found an instruction inside the bottle to tell me how to clean it. How complicated a drink bottle could be?! There are three parts of the lid: straw holder, valve assembly and spout. Firstly, remove the straw for best results. Turn underside of the lid up and pull up straw holder and valve assembly to separate from spout. Then rinse thoroughly. Insert valve assembly into spout, straw holder into valve assembly and straw into straw holder. (Can it be more complicated ?) Push straw up as far as possible to nest correctly into lid. The most unbelievable reminder is a sentence written in Black Bold Font and all in capital: RINSE LID IMMEDIATELY AFTER EACH USE. How could I rinse my drink bottle every time after I have a sip?March 3, 201920
- Misunderstanding Last Friday, I recommended italki to one of my colleagues. He is an Australia bloke, speaks in a very native Australian accent. The reason I share with him is that I think maybe he needs money. He once had a second hand car and it was on installment. But one of the car’s main parts broke down. He couldn’t drive it at all because fixing the old car was more expensive than buying another car. Since then, he has to spend one and a half hours one way by train and walk to work everyday. I thought maybe he could work as a community teacher and make some money from here because at least he is a native English speaker. However, the funniest thing is that he completely got me wrong. He thought I was fond of learning different languages. Then, he showed me a lot of translation App and how to say hello and goodbye in many different languages. At the end of the day, before my departure, he said a sentence in a whatever language and told me it means “goodbye young lady” in German...March 2, 201910
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