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- 1.今日、私は大学にいました。2.新しいコースなので、わたしの新しい先生に会った。3.(租)税法はやや難しい。そしてそれが退屈な先生であるために悪化することはもう分かりました。4.少なくとも、2人の同僚と入学しました。5.したがって、時間を利用して、外国言語を練習します。6.私の日本語を上達させることがたくさんあります。 添削をよろしくお願いします。 What I tried to say! 1) Today I was at the University 2)Because it is a new course, I met my new teacher today 3) Tax Law is somewhat difficult, and I can already tell it will be worse now because of a boring teacher. 4) At least I enrolled in the course with two colleagues 5) Therefore, I will use my time to practice foreign languages. 6)There are many things to improve in my japanese Thanks so much
Comment:
Overall, pretty good!!
However, your Japanese sounds like you're translating from English.
For example, sentence 3, I can understand your Japanese and it's not grammatically wrong but Japanese native speakers may not talk in this way.
More natural way→税法は少し難しい上に、先生がつまらないのでもっと面白くなくなると(初回の授業で)もうわかりました。
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0 votedMarch 5, 20191 - Introduction of myself Hi everyone, my name is Ami.
I'm studying Media (and of course English as well) in Canada.
I like to watch movies, Anime or YouTube videos.
I have been studying English more than 10 years, however, I'm feeling my English is still poor. I want to improve my English much more, and also I would love to help you guys who are interested in learning Japanese or something about Japan!
Actually, I just started using this app so I'm not sure how to use it, but please feel free to leave comment and talk to me.
February 25, 201930 - 11. 一人で家にいますか、友達を招待しますか、誰かの家に行きますか。あなたはもっと何が好きですか(or あなたはどれが一番好きですか)。 私は全てが好きなので、何も選ぶことはできません。 (11. What do you like more: to stay home alone, call friends or go to somebody's house? I can't choose between these options because I like each of them.) 12. あなたはこの週末に何をする予定ですか。 この週末には、「祖国の日の擁護者」と言うロシアの祝日を祝います。そこで、愛妻家(旦那さん)のためにチーズケーキを作ろうと思っています。 (12. What do you want to do this weekend? This weekend we celebrate the Russian national holiday, which is called Defender of the Fatherland Day. Therefore, I’m going to cook cheesecake for my lovely (*We don't have any exact translation for "lovely")husband.) 13. おいしい料理を作りますか、配達を注文しますか、または喫茶店に行きますか。あなたに一番近いの返事はどれですか。 その答えは11日目と同じです。時々これらすべてのオプションを練習します。でも、家で料理を作るのはより頻繁に行いますが、喫茶店にはあまり行きませんはより少なくなります。 (13. What do you prefer: cook something tasty, have a food order delivered or go to a cafe? My same answer that on day 11. I practice all these options from time to time. However, cooking at home occurs more often, and going to a restaurant occurs less often.)0 votedFebruary 25, 20190
