我<strike>就</strike>要睡觉了....

对不起，
我今天比昨天<strike>我</strike>更加得<strike>很</strike>困。
所以今天我就睡觉了！！
明天见~ 哈哈

发现两个问题

昨天谢谢你们！
不过我有不明白的地方。
这些是 今天从十二点到二十一点一直"在"打工。
和 明天我"会"努力写小作文的。
为什么需要"在"和"会"？
请教<strike>给</strike>我！

我<strike>从</strike>早上八点到晚上八点在打工。
中途我休息了两个小时。
那时我回家吃饭了、，睡了半个小时觉<strike>了</strike>。
昨天和今天我都一直打工，所以我没做完作业。
现在我做作业吧。

明天我要六点<strike>要</strike>起床。我想早点睡觉<strike>早点儿</strike>,但是....... （其实你那样写也可以的）

I'm thankful to you yesterday.
But I have what I don't understand.
Those are 今天从十二点到二十一点一直"在"打工。
and 明天我"会"努力写小作文的。
Why are "在"和"会" needed?
Please tell me about it!

I have a part-time job from 8 to 20.
There are rest 2 hours the middle of it.
Then I went back home for taking lunch and sleeping about a harf hour.
I worked in two days, I haven't done my homework.
So I'm going to do it from now.
But I have to wake up at 6 o'clock.
I wanna go to bed early, but.................

太累了... ！I'm very tired(⊃д･｀)

今天从十二点到二十一点一直打工了。
我觉得忧郁....
我今天太累了，我的小作文很短。对不起(⊃д･｀)
明天也有打工。所以明天的小作文也.....
不是，明天我努力写小作文！！
明天见~

I had a part-time job from 12 to 21.
I feel blue now......
I am so tired, so today's my dairy is very short. Sorry(⊃д･｀)
I also have it tomorrow.This is why tomorrow's my dairy also......
No,no. I'll make effort to write dairy!!
See you tomorrow!

修改
今天从十二点到二十一点一直都在打工，
我觉得郁闷······
今天太累了，所以我的小作文很短，对不起。
明天我也要打工，所以明天的小作文也···
不是，明天我会努力写小作文的！
明天见~

没有什么特别的···

我每天都努力学中文，不过我能用中文不容易。

我不愿意星期六和星期天的到来。
因为这些天我要打工，而且我打算一共打工十六个小时。
我想到这件事就觉得郁闷。 哈哈

今天我觉得感冒了，其实也没有感冒。
就是常咳嗽，所以我就睡觉了。

I study Chinese hard everyday,
but it is difficult for me to use it as I hope.

I don't hope Saturday and Sanday come.
Becouse these days I have part-time jobs,
and I'll work about 16 hours in all.
I think about it, I feel blue. lol

I thought I cought a cold, actually I didn't catch it.
However, i have a little cough, so I go to bed earlier.