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太累了... ！I'm very tired(⊃д･｀) 今天从十二点到二十一点一直打工了。 我觉得忧郁.... 我今天太累了，我的小作文很短。对不起(⊃д･｀) 明天也有打工。所以明天的小作文也..... 不是，明天我努力写小作文！！ 明天见~ I had a part-time job from 12 to 21. I feel blue now...... I am so tired, so today's my dairy is very short. Sorry(⊃д･｀) I also have it tomorrow.This is why tomorrow's my dairy also...... No,no. I'll make effort to write dairy!! See you tomorrow!

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谢谢你们！
不过我有不明白的地方。
这些是 今天从十二点到二十一点一直"在"打工。 和 明天我"会"努力写小作文的。
为什么需要"在"和"会"？
 

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坚持就是胜利！！！^0^
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太累了... ！I'm very tired(⊃д･｀)


今天从十二点到二十一点一直打工了。
我觉得忧郁....
我今天太累了，我的小作文很短。对不起(⊃д･｀)
明天也有打工。尽管时间有限
但是我仍会会尽力去做好它
明天见...

I had a part-time job from 12 to 21.
I feel blue now......
I am so tired, so today's my dairy is very short. Sorry(⊃д･｀)
I also have it tomorrow.Thought the time limit
I also do my best to make  it  better
See you tomorrow!
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太累了... ！I'm very tired(⊃д･｀)


今天从十二点到二十一点一直打工了。
我觉得忧郁....
我今天太累了，我的小作文很短。对不起(⊃д･｀)
明天也有打工。所以明天的小作文也.....
不是，明天我努力写小作文！！
明天见~

I had a part-time job from 12 to 21.
I feel blue now......
I am so tired, so today's my dairy is very short. Sorry(⊃д･｀)
I also have it tomorrow.This is why tomorrow's my dairy also......
No,no. I'll make effort to write dairy!!
See you tomorrow!
今天从中午到晚上九点我一直在打工，我觉得很郁闷。
因为我今天太累了，所以我的小作文很短，多不起啊！
明天也要打工，所以明天的小作文也会.....
不是，明天我会努力写小作文的！！
明天见
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太累了... ！I'm very tired(⊃д･｀)


今天从十二点到二十一点一直在打工了。
我觉得有点郁闷忧郁....
我今天太累了，我的小作文很短。对不起(⊃д･｀)
明天也有要打工。所以明天的小作文也.....
不是，明天我还是会努力写小作文！！
明天见~


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