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I'm sure that the governments around the world should invest serious money in the exploration of space. Discovering new planets is a way to solve many of Earth's problems such as overpopulation, lack of fossil minerals etc. Undoubtedly Earth has many different problems and we have to solve them. We are the dominant race on this planet and are creators of its main problems. Oil spills, air pollution, the destruction of the ozone layer -  all these problems are leading Earth to catastrophe. Exploration of space could be a solution to Earth's problems. Nobody knows what is happening on planets and stars such as Mars and the Moon. It's possible that in the subsoil of these celestial objects there is an immense reserve of oil or charcoal. Therefore I think it essential to explore space but at the same time not forget to care about Earth.