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Hepl me!:) Can you give me any advice on how I can improve this text? All your advice is valuable to me. Thank you! I'm sure that the governments of the world should invest an enormous amount of money in exploration space. A mastering of new planets it is a way to a solution of the Earth's problems such as overpopulation, lack of fossil minerals etc. Undoubtedly the Earth has lots of different problems and we have to solve them. We are the main race on this planet and the main problem of it. Spills of oil, pollution of the air, destruction of the ozone layer all these problems lead the Earth to the catastrophe. It's crucial to solving the problems of the Earth and exploration of the space could be a solution. Nobody knows what are contained under the layer of planets such as Mars and Moon. It's possible that in the subsoil of these celestial objects have an immense reserve of oil or charcoal. Therefore I think it essential to explore the space and at the same time don't forget to care about Earth.

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Help me!:)

Can you give me any advice on how I can improve this text? All your advice is valuable to me. Thank you!


I'm sure that the governments around the world should invest serious money in the exploration of space. Discovering new planets is a way to solve many of Earth's problems such as overpopulation, lack of fossil minerals etc. Undoubtedly Earth has many different problems and we have to solve them. We are the dominant race on this planet and are creators of its main problems. Oil spills, air pollution, the destruction of the ozone layer -  all these problems are leading Earth to catastrophe. Exploration of space could be a solution to Earth's problems. Nobody knows what is happening on planets and stars such as Mars and the Moon. It's possible that in the subsoil of these celestial objects there is an immense reserve of oil or charcoal. Therefore I think it essential to explore space but at the same time not forget to care about Earth.

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Hepl Help me!:)

Can you give me any advice on how I can improve this text? All your advice is valuable to me. Thank you!

I'm sure that the governments of the world should invest an enormous amount of money in space exploration. A mastering of new planets it is a way to a solution of for the Earth's problems such as of overpopulation, lack of fossil minerals, etc. Undoubtedly the Earth has lots of different problems and we have to solve them. We are the main race on this planet and the main problem of the planet it. Oil Spills of oil, air pollution of the air, destruction of the ozone layer, all these problems will lead the Earth to the a catastrophe. Exploration of the space could be a solution to solving It's Earth‘s crucial problems the space could be a solution. Nobody knows what is are contained under the planatary layer of Mars and the Moon. It's possible that in the subsoil of these celestial objects there may be have an immense reserve of oil or charcoal. Therefore, I think it essential to explore the space and at the same time don't forget to care about Earth.

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