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    CV/Resume

    I am working as a part time barista but I have a cafe where I am eager to work for.

    I am editing my CV again to apply the cafe.

    I would like to let them know how much I want to work there and how much I have a passion for coffee.

    This is what I am thinking of writing my CV.

    I am Japanese who come to (city name) to learn coffee culture and develop my skills as a Barista.I have +2years of experience working at fast paced coffee shop enviroment.I am efficiant, outgoing, panctual passionate about providing customers with perfect cafe experience.


    Hi Miki, hope you get the job you want :) Please see below.

    I am Japanese and I came to (name of city) to learn more about the coffee culture and to develop my skills as a barista. I have over two years' experience working in a fast paced coffee shop environment and I am efficient, outgoing, punctual and passionate about providing high level of customer service with the perfect coffee experience.

    All the best Miki :)

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    February 27, 2019
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    Hi Yi, Yes your sentence is correct. Well done!
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    February 26, 2019
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    Safety in country

    It is said believed that Japan is a safety country, however, nowadays you can't say that. Crime is on the rise where children often go to school in a group or with their parents.  The number of the criminals has incruded enough. The childlen also go to school with group or with their parents.It's better to pay attention to what you have on you; and especially when you walk outside at night. It's better to walk on the lit roads outside where there are other people around. the load where it's light ant there are the people.

    Other countries may be different. I don't know well about the situation of other country but maybe it's different between each countries. Next week I'll be in Ireland, but I don't know how much I should actually I pay attention actually. I'll do everything I can minimum things to protect myself.


    Hope this helps with flow :)

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    February 24, 2019
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    Please edit my entry

    No matter how old you are are you, you are never too old grown up to take risks

    Or

    You are never too late to take risk.

    Or: It's never too late to take risks.


    No matter how old you are, you are never too old to take risks sounds more natural than the second sentence. Or you could say: It's never too late to take risks.

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    February 24, 2019
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