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CV/Resume I am working as a part time barista but I have a cafe where I am eager to work for.

I am editing my CV again to apply the cafe.

I would like to let them know how much I want to work there and how much I have a passion for coffee.

This is what I am thinking of writing my CV.

I am Japanese who come to (city name) to learn coffee culture and develop my skills as a Barista.I have +2years of experience working at fast paced coffee shop enviroment.I am efficiant, outgoing, panctual passionate about providing customers with perfect cafe experience.

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CV/Resume

I am working as a part time barista but I have a cafe in mind where I am eager to work for.

I am editing my CV again to apply the cafe.

I would like to let them know how much I want to work there and how much I have a passion for coffee.

This is what I am thinking of writing my CV.

I am a Japanese* who come to (city name) to learn coffee culture and to develop my skills as a Barista. I have +2 more than two years of experience working at in a fast-paced coffee shop environment**. I am efficient, outgoing, punctual, and passionate about providing customers with a perfect*** cafe experience.

Nice work! And good luck. 頑張ってください! 

If you really want coffee culture, you should come to Seattle!

* Instead of "Japanese" or "a Japanese" it would be more natural to say "I am a native of Japan who came to . . . " or "I am a young Japanese woman" or something else. ("I'm a Japanese software engineer who . . ." "I am a Japanese fashion designer who . . ."  笑 you get the idea).

** "Environment" is one of those weird English words that isn't spelled the way it sounds. The "n" in the middle doesn't do anything. By the way, be sure to insert a blank space after every comma or period.

*** "Perfect" is okay. Is there a more expressive word that is more expressive? ". . . a delicious cafe experience" " . . . a relaxing cafe experience." " . . .  an invigorating cafe experience" 

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CV/Resume

I am working as a part time barista but I have a cafe where I am eager to work for.

I am editing my CV again to apply the cafe.

I would like to let them know how much I want to work there and how much I have a passion for coffee.

This is what I am thinking of writing my CV.

I am Japanese who come to (city name) to learn coffee culture and develop my skills as a Barista.I have +2years of experience working at fast paced coffee shop enviroment.I am efficiant, outgoing, panctual passionate about providing customers with perfect cafe experience.


Hi Miki, hope you get the job you want :) Please see below.

I am Japanese and I came to (name of city) to learn more about the coffee culture and to develop my skills as a barista. I have over two years' experience working in a fast paced coffee shop environment and I am efficient, outgoing, punctual and passionate about providing high level of customer service with the perfect coffee experience.

All the best Miki :)

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