1. I think you need to eat more rather than writing poems. You're becoming a bag of bones. or 1. I think you need to eat more rather than writing a poem. You're becoming a bag of bones. (first one is more natural because of the implication of multiple poems instead of one poem specifically). 2. I think it's almost impossible for you to become healthy, but why not give it a try? 3. He always says "time will tell" but the funny thing is his time never comes. 4. Whom will I tell about you? 5. Thanks for your plethora of suggestions. 6. What were the circumstances that led you to be here? 7. I am not a person to be sneered at. 8. Call me when you get home. 9. Text me in case you need any help. They're all pretty good and almost fully flawless :)

Two weeks ago, I started working out at home. I follow a Youtube channel that focuses on fitness. Every night the creator goes life on Youtube, and she works out at fome for 30 minutes. (to reference the "she" in your sentence, you need to clarify who she is) Many people who are subscribed to her channel, like me, exercise watching her videos. I thought it wouldn't be motivating because I used to go to a gym for five years, and exercising at home wasn't helpful in the past, but after a couple of days of exercising with her, I found that it made me feel good and energetic. She also sells some exercising equipment; I bought a spine corrector from her and have been working out watching her Youtube videos. (because you are referencing specific exercising videos, and not her channel as a whole) I het backache quite easily and need to be very careful when I work out. Spine corrector workouts are really good to correct my spine’s curves and strengthen my abdominals. It’s also lowered my stress level so much. (don't say first of all since you have already listed other reasons) I’ll try to work out at least three times a week to get into shape. (this sentence makes sense, but you need to change the tense if you want it to fit into your paragraph). Let me know if you've any questions :)

To make it sound natural, I believe what you should try to say is: "Comparing the review to the real thing, it's different," or "Compared to the real thing, the review is quite different." Hope this helps. Let me know if there's anything else :)

Hi Emu, In (1) you are giving more of a direct command. You are saying that you want someone to play the piano, insinuating that there is a piano present in the setting, and that you would like that someone to play it in that moment. In (2), it is similar to (1). You can take the statement the same way, where you presume there is a piano in the setting, and you'd like someone to play it for you in that moment. You can also take this situation as a more general statement, like when a parent tells you that they'd like you to start taking piano lessons, because they want you to learn to play the piano. In that case, (2) makes sense too. Because you say "the piano" instead of "piano" you can direct it to a specific piano in the setting. In (3), I don't really hear it that often. The way I picture it in my mind is that you are in an instruments shop, and you are choosing a piano to buy, and therefore you need to play one to see the difference. It is a more general statement, and although it makes sense, (1) and (2) are more common. Hope this helps. Let me know if there's more clarification needed!

Hi Kevin, To be nervous is to be anxious about something, or anticipant. To be worried can also mean this, but usually it is used in more negative tones. To say that you are worried about something is to be anticipating negative outcomes, whereas to be nervous, you can be more than just anticipant of the worst - you can just be 'antsy' and jittery. To say I am worried about my presentation means that I am scared it is going to go wrong. I am expecting a bad result because I did not prepare well for it, and I don't think I am going to perform well. To say I am nervous for my presentation means that I am jittery, and I don't know how it going to go. I prepared for it, but I am getting butterflies in my stomach because I get nervous when I present. It can go very badly, but I can also do very well on it. I don't know if this is enough of an explanation. Let me know if you want more context or examples please!

Hi Mehrdad, You can say "I shower in the morning" or "I showered this morning." To say "I shower within the morning" is the wrong use of the word within. "Within" is used to say that something happened in a set amount of time or less, and that it will pass before something happens. "In" is used to say that a specific set time will pass before another action or event occurs. To put it more plainly, there are a few examples below: I will be there in ten minutes --> I will arrive in exactly ten minutes (the set amount of time). I will be there within ten minutes --> I will arrive in less than ten minutes. To use within in your sentence, you are saying that you showered in less time than the morning, which doesn't really make sense. To say that you showered in the morning sets a specific time in the day, but doesn't convey anything less or more. I hope this makes sense. It is quite a difficult topic to explain, and also challenging to grasp at times, even as a native speaker. Let me know if you have any other questions!