Sept 3, 2019
Today was wonderful day. In the morning I drove to a veterinary clinic to vaccination my cat. It was OK after that. By the way, its name is Rafkat.
But most importantly, we have been living fourteen years with my wife. We married September 3, 2005. In the evening my wife, my children and I went to a restaurant and had fest dinner.
I will be thankful for any correction.
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Sept 3, 2019
Today was wonderful day. In the morning, I drove to a veterinary clinic to vaccinate my cat. It was OK after that. By the way, its name is Rafkat.
But most importantly, I have been living with my wife for fourteen years. We married on September 3, 2005. In the evening my wife, my children and I went to a restaurant and had dinner.
I will be thankful for any correction.
You can also write this - it sounds a little more natural!
Today was a good day. This morning, I drove to the veterinary clinic to vaccinate my cat, which went OK. Its name is Rafkat. I then went back home to my wife.
We have been living together for fourteen years now. We married on September 3, 2005.
In the evening, my wife, children and I went to a restaurant, and we had a lovely dinner. This made my day wonderful.
What you wrote is fine too! I would however suggest finding more connectors, because your sentences don't always seem to flow into one another. To make it more coherent, I would try to find connector words, or try to match your sentence topics more so that one topic flows into the next.
Hope this helped!
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