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    English composition: Agree or disagree Topic is above the text

    Topic is: The number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.

    I agree with that the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future, and I have two reasons to support this opinion.

    To begin with, Japan is facing a long recession, hence therefore many people cannot afford to raise the cost of living as they used to, and if young people are independent of their parents and make a living on their own, they will have to take get a part time job. Then they cannot spend time to their hobbies or study.

    Secondly, living alone is dangerous. Nowadays, the rate of crimes is increasing, thus many parents often think young people should not live alone. It's true that living with parents is inferior to living alone in terms of personal freedom.

    However, considering the cost of living and safety, the choice of that young people are living independent of their parents could may not say be a good choice., therefore Therefore, I believe the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish their education will increase in the future.

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    Please correct it !!

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    Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic! I agree that these days, it's difficult for young people to live independently after finishing their education. The cost of living in many places are increasing, yet work wages continue to remain the same. This makes it difficult for people to afford things such as a place to live. 

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    May 3, 2019
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    Having more money and less free time or earning less money and having more free time

    In the modern world there is a huge problem for all people: how to keep maintain a work-life balance. Many people try to be perfect in both areas, but it likely leads to burnout and other consequences for mental health. In order to avoid these consequences every person should prioritise their aims.

    A closer look to at the first script idea (having more money and less free time) reveals that a person concentrates on career promotion and spends less time on hobbies, their family and so on. On the one hand, it is great if their occupation brings satisfaction to the person and they do not feel guilty for spending less time with friends and family. On the other hand, if their efforts really bring a lot of money and, in the meantime, a person destroys their relationships with close people, it is hard to call this person happy.

    By contrast, in the secong second script idea there is a person who cares about their private life and who is less engaged in the working process. On the one hand, they devote free time to their hobbies and have fan fun if they do not feel a huge lack of money. On the other hand, it can be taugh tough to live on the same life level at the same quality of life constantly, meaning is that if life quality is the same for many years and a person do does not have an opportunity for development, some displeasure could be felt.

    To conclude, people choose their main life aims and follow their decisions, but it is vital to find a balance between both sides of life. Certanly Certainly, it is not possible to be overachiver  an overachiever and keep both sides of life ideal during all lifetime, sometimes it is just fine to choose the main priority or switch between priorities in the different life periods.

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    Great work, Dmitrii! I enjoyed reading your thoughts on work-life balance. When people think of work-life balance, they think of spending equal amounts of time and focus to work life and personal life, but there isn't enough time in a day to do that successfully on a constant basis. Alternating priorities can be a good way to bring some balance, allowing people to do their work well and also finding time to enjoy the things they do outside of work.

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    May 2, 2019
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    The best job

    Hi everibody everybody.

    I want to talk about the work, the things that peple people do arround around the world to get earn money and contribute with to society to make a better world. 

    I think that if you do in a right way your job your job right, thats that's it! I mean if you make and an effort to do the best in your technical task field and your behavior work well with partners, clients and everyone arround around you, you will be beyond above the good and bad. :P

    But how do you decide which work to do for the rest of your life?

    I see too so many people who are sad, angry and frustated frustrated because they don't like their jobs.

    Sometimes there are a lot of voices arroud around us saying: you have to... you most to must... you need ... the best for you is...

    And we forgot to listen to ourselves, our heart and mind.

    I'm still looking for a job, so I hope for me and all the peolpe people looking for a job, we can find the place, people and tasks that let us be ourselves, to be happy, and make a happy world

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    Lovely post, Gabriela! I agree that there are many people who are unhappy with their current jobs. I think it's important to never give up on a dream, and to work hard to make a dream come true.

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    May 2, 2019
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    My first essay

    This is my first essay on this site education. I hope I would like to write and talk speak better. I'm I've been studying hard english English hard for about four months, because I will have a test this year. So, I'm thankfully I will be thankful (or "grateful") for your contribution to review reviewing these phrases.

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    Hi Kelly! I hope you will do well on your test. If you continue to work hard, you will be able to make great improvements in your writing and speaking abilities!

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    May 2, 2019
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    I like to read Japanese comics (manga). My favorite ones are from the Dragon Ball series.
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    May 2, 2019
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    One of Japanese people's tendencies One of the tendencies of Japanese people

    I'd like to talk about one of Japanese people's the tendencies of Japanese people with English.

    For example, if a person become famous and get gets a lot of fans, the fans are sometimes called "......er."

    I think Japanese people like adding "er" to a preson's person's name.

    So what do you call the a person who make writes poems?

    In Japan I think a lot of young people call him or her a poemer poet.

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    Nice work, Nobu! In English, when we refer to someone who writes poems, we call them a "poet." When we want to refer to someone who is a fan of a famous person, we say they are a "fan of (person's name)" or "(person's name) fan." For example, "a fan of Michael Jackson" or "a Micheal Jackson fan."

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    May 2, 2019
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    is it true?

    I used to hear that when you are becoming reach your 20s, you'll find gain some experiences. The experiences themselves are what will build your personality. And I think it's true, I got have had so many experiences that have really mixed my feelings given me mixed feelings. Happiness, sadness, doubt, furious fury/anger, grateful gratitude, all the feelings that make me think twice before I speak, before I act, and know when to listen to other.
    But lately I'm feeling so blue but I don't even know why. My mood changes drastically and it is confusing me.

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    Hi Nurul! Reaching your 20s can come with so many new experiences. There will be times when your emotions can cause you a lot of confusion, but I believe that is part of the learning process when becoming an adult. We can learn from those experiences and use them to grow as people. 

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    May 2, 2019
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    Today the weather is too much windy

    Today the weather is windy, too much windy for this season. It shake shakes the fruit trees and the little unripe unripened fruits fall down. This afternoon I went in my garden and I found a lot of unripe unripened apricots in the grass. Fortunately this happened only for to only one tree, and the other one it's is ok. I hope the wind will soon stop to blow so strong blowing so strongly.

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    Great job, Patrizia! You expressed your thoughts well and it was easy to understand what you wanted to talk about. 

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    May 2, 2019
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    Some sentences to practice grammar and vocabulary

    People,
    Can someone correct my sentences below? I'd appreciate a lot

    1-We need to check our milestones to know about predict the outcomes. That´s This a wise decision!
    2-By the end of the month, if you don’t start to write haven't started writing it, you won’t have it done. 
    3- I rather highly doubt I’ll be able to do it.
    4- If you study English alone, you need to self-assess yourself, troubleshoot, and focus on your schedule.
    5- It is was not as easy as it looked before I started.
    6- The job has been more complicated that than I’d imagined.
    7- I ought to study another language.

    thanks

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    Great work, Fabiana! I was able to understand  the intended meanings of the sentences very easily. I believe that with some grammar practice, you will continue to improve!


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    May 2, 2019
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    Hello! To answer your question, "folks" can be used to refer to both a group of people and parents. It really depends on the context. I agree that it's interesting how this word can be used for both things. As a native English speaker, I've never thought much about the ways in which this word can be used. But thinking about it now, "folks" is a good example of how there are many English words that can have multiple uses.
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    February 24, 2019
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