Women : Better Parents than Men? (Introduction) <  이 글에 관해서, 이건 제대로 제목이에요.

Some people might say women take a greater role in parenting than men do.

On the other hand, others might say that men actually do more than women when it comes to parenting.

Each has their own very convincing reasons that support their point of view.

However, in my opinion, I'd argue that both men and women have different but very important roles to play when it comes to parenting.

Men and women are inherently different by gender and each follows his or her particular instincts when it comes to parenting.

In general I'd say that men are more rational than women and women are more emotional than men, and it might be one of the important defining factors when it comes to parenting styles.

Also, in an average family, men work outside the home while women work at home, so what they bring to parenting comes from very different life experiences.

Therefore, when it comes to a child's education, both parents would be be able to teach different but beneficial things to their chid.

I like others, also have several examples which support my point of view.///opinion.

About My Favorite Hobby.

Kendo is my favorite hobby.

It's a kind of traditional martial art from Japan. is my favorite hobby.

I usually practice kendo every evening.

I first started practicing kendo in/when I was in high school.

Now I've have been practicing Kendo for about 6 years now.

For doing It requires a few items to do kendo, they are: A Bamboo blade, some special clothing, head gear, protective gloves, and body Armor.

It can be a little bit expensive, so I haven't yet bought all of the equipment necessary for the sport. Altogether, everything would cost (me about) $400.

In kendo, the first person to score 2 points in a kendo match wins (that match).

Players can only make contact with 4 parts of body: The head, the neck, the wrists, and the waist.

These rules are only for the modern day sport of kendo.

The rules of the original Kendo sport were different.

Originally players could hit the all part of the body, which was/could be quite dangerous.

I think that's why they changed the rules.

I think that's why the rules changed. 

One perfect hit earns one point.

Is the sport of kendo played in countries other than Korea? 

내가 아는에서, 그것은 아니다.

Correction Request) Questions and Answers 2

1. Do you want to get a good job where you can make a lot of money?

 Or do you want to get a job that you really enjoy but doesn't pay very much?
- As for me, I'd choose the latter every time!

Making a lot of money isn't as important to me as living a happy life. I think/feel that I should do what I really enjoy doing. Money can't guarantee my happiness. Of course, if you have lots of money, many things in life would be very convenient. However a person needs other important things  in life, like love, self-esteem, friendship etc... I want to have a job which helps me reach my goals as an adult in life. So I always do my best to discover whatever I'm interested in and my abilities. I know that when I find them, I'll know that that's what I should do. I feel that since I’m trying hard to do that, that I can be assured a happy life.

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Broken glass

A broken glass is not easily repaired. < 이 문장은 맞습니다.

Is that right? 위의 문장은 올바른 문장입니다.

My Prayer <  우수한 제목입니다.

I wish you all the luck in the world. < 완벽했습니다.

"It would be very nice of you if you could/또는/would correct any mistakes in my writing. Thanks"

I helped him all  (that) I could.

However, one day, things had changed.

It was probably because we went off to different universities, and we could barely kept in touch.

I felt like we gradually started to grow apart.< 좋습니다.

We weren't able be able to see each other as/very often and do things together.

That had to be expected.

I wasn't)=was not) too concerned and we just lived as we occasionally checked in with each other. < 좋다.

"It would be very nice of you if you could/would correct mistakes in my writing. Thanks."

Poor Dog! < 올바은 제목입니다. 

Somebody uploaded this photo with the caption, (with a caption that read(s), as "The reason why you should not allow dogs to swallow chewing gums".

It's not funny for the dog....but it's hard not to laugh.

이 사진은 포토숍을 한것 같아요. 그건 진짜할 수 없어요. 설마! ㅎㅎ