Gee your chinese is so good haha!

Just two small fluffs in your writting:

'那下个月加工资，好吧？' is better than '好的？' and “好吧，你们说服了我” is better than “好的，你们说服了我”。

In your contexts, “好吧” emphasises that the manager accepts the deal, but with a pinch of reluctance---think this gives the sentences a more nuanced meaning))

Oh forgot to mention, the use of "儿” might not be natural but since I am very bad at using "儿”, I am not sure if my judgement is correct...

Hope this helps.🙈

Hi friend:) “城市” means City while "镇" town. Furthermore(perhaps a bit more advanced), 镇 as a verb means to crack down/oppress Hope this helps.

Hello everyone I want to share my secret base here. It's a japanese style house and the owner was a general.After Since he passed away,the house has kept the Japanese style and a redecorated interior.Now it is a bookstore so comfortable that makes me always want to stay there.So I go there when something upsets me. 哈囉 大家好 我想跟大家分享我的秘密基地.它是一棟日式風格的房子,以前主人是一位將軍.在他過世之後,房子保留原本的日式風格並重新裝潢內部.現在它是一間書店,非常的舒服讓我想一直待在那裏.每當我對某些事感到沮喪的時候就會去那裏. "Thanks for correcting my essay"

Great work😊

Vince Carter, Air Canada, washas been one of the best dunkers in the NBA league. He could hooped, dunked and even make three-point shooting shots, especially he was unguarded unguardable that since he could dunk over other players' head if he wanted. He started made his debut in Toronto Raptors team which was in Canada. Not many players wanted to be there as Raptors team was a newly-founded and anonymous obscure team that was completely unattractive. Although Raptors team was a weak team weak at that time, Carter still went for to Canada and played the games with his cousin, Tracy Mcgrady who later became one of the a Hall of famers and one of the best scorers in the NBA league. A few years later, Carter won his the championship in the NBA slam dunk competition contest and even scored the full marks in his dunk performance. The most crucial best things I admire about him is not only are his great performance in NBA league, but also and his characters . He unlikes is not like other players who only want to form a big and incredible team so as to win best final NBA championthe final. He just purely loves the basketball games even being as a backup reserve player.

只纠正了语法，写法用词什么的还可以进一步提高哦:)

Btw, am also a fan of Vince. Good one mate:)

1明天晚上我跟朋友去一起要去电影院看电影。 2我爸爸每天早上我爸爸看报纸。 3因为我经常运动，所以我身体很好。 4我姐姐跳舞跳得非常好。 5今天晚上你有没有事？ 我想请你在去餐厅吃北京烤鸭。 6我穿我的好看的裙子。 裙子怎么样？ 7早上你的眼睛很红的，你哭了吗？？不是。 昨天我睡觉睡得真很晚。 8明天星期六。你（打算）怎么玩？我跟哥哥的朋友一起打篮球跑步。 9我很累了， 因为我去中心买东西。 10安娜，请让你妹妹给我打电话。

Надеюсь, что это полезно для вас))

Hi I would love to be your language partner since I am learning Russian:)

（1）第一个听起来很奇怪，中文里一般不会这样子说...但是“打怪”的意思是在游戏中打败敌人 （2）someone who rushes the tempo （3）用来嘲笑南方人喝不了太多酒（since people from the south usually have a low alcohol tolerance)

你好👋🏻 Right fit中文的翻译大致是“契合”。 栗子： 某人契合我们的团队---someone is a right fit for our team