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    January 4, 2019
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    请,看一下,对吗?

    沙丁鱼不合影 适应浅水的环境。作为商品销售,死掉的鱼比活着的便宜得多。找到了有一个解决办法:是把食肉鲇鱼放进装沙丁鱼的设备中。为了存活,沙丁鱼成为旺盛将变得活跃。因此存活的比例提高了。
    经济学的“鲇鱼效应”的意思是小企业如果想获得成功,应该采取措施,通过竞争让它们搞活保持活力。
    人们都是这样遇到危机的情况也是这样,压力很大的时候每次往往能找到发掘出潜力。所以无论工作,、运动,还是家常生活,什么的挑战我们都能经得起经受得起。

    *根据网上

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    December 27, 2018
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    Daily Record As I planed in these day, I moved to the new aprtment today. I thought it would be easy, but acually it's an experience full of unexpected memory. After lunch, I ordered a sharing-car to take my luggage. It showed that I could drive this car for about 60km before running out of the electricity, and the distance to the destination was about 40km. It should have been OK, but 'the electricity would decrease a bit faster in the cold weather than normal' warned by the official app. It was not until I approached the apartment that I stopped worring that the car might stop somewhere in the freeway where there is no place to park the car. I was lucky that I finally arrived the apartment without disastrous stop. But then, desperately, I found that I forgot to bring the medicine which is the most importance thing for me these day (even more than computer and cellphone :p), that meaned I had to return where I came from. How stupid I am! I didn't want to drive back since I was free from taking luggage. So I returned the car into the service point and was going to start the familiar process -- take the bus, shift to the subway, shift to another bus. However, before I got to the bus stop, it was going to rain. Then the similar thing happened -- It was not untill I got to the bus stop that I stopped worring about being a drowned rat. I should have written another story in my new apartment now. But after five hours' 'effort', I returned to the very beginning. I am too tired to go to the new apartment again so at least, I can stay in the old place for one more night and my luggage (including pillow and blanket) can enjoy a nice sleep without being disturbed by their owner.
    December 27, 2018
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  • Corrected
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    December 26, 2018
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    有朋友反对我修改,理由是原文没有错误。这点我也同意,我不能说这篇文章有语法错误或其他错误。我只是把文段改得我觉得更通顺一点~

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    為何學中文?

    我學過很多年的中文,。我也在中國留過學。但是,這幾年我基本沒有機會練習中文,。因為身邊周圍沒有中國人,即使有有的話也全都是學生,而我覺得我跟他們之间沒有太多共同语言點。所以我問我自己,為甚麼还要繼續學中文呢?我沒有不打算去中國,而且我工作上也用不到不用中文。雖然我很喜歡書法,中國歷史和文學,但是這是不是有些得不偿失‘付出多,回報少‘?我還可以學習很多其他的東西還有很多東西我能學習,也許會更比較有用些?我也不清楚不知道。

    謝謝。

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    緑底色代表我的修改建議,紅底色加横線代表我認為需要删改的内容,藍底色代表我認為可添加也可不添的内容。希望能幫到你 : )

    後面是改動了語序的版本,我的輸入法輸入大段繁體字比較困難,所以使用了簡体,望見諒!

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    为何学中文?

    我学过很多年的中文,也在中国留过学。但是这几年我基本没有机会练习中文,因为身边没有中国人,即使有也全都是学生,而我觉得我跟他们之间没有太多共同语言。我不打算去中国,而且工作上也用不到中文,所以我问自己,为什么还要继续学中文呢?虽然我很喜欢书法、中国历史和文学,但是我可以把时间用在学习其他更有用的东西上,所以我学习中文是不是有些得不偿失?我也不清楚。

    谢谢

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    December 26, 2018
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