Day 5: A different experience
Once upon a time, there was a girl (me) who spoke and wrote English much better than she does today and lived in Australia.
That girl was doing an exchange program in Melbourne and before <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">come</s> going back to her country, she <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">would</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">like</s> wanted to have a radical experience. So, she thought why not do skydiving?? What an experience! But she didn't want to do that in Australia, she <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">would</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">like</s> wanted to have this experience in Queenstown, New Zealand. Here I <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">had</s> have a tip for you when you <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">go</s> travel<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">ling</s>. If you arrive in the city and the day is perfect even if you are tired, take pictures, take a lot of pictures, because the <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">other</s> next day <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">can</s> may be very horrible, you know, it can be rain<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">n</s>ing. This happened to me. :( Luckily I took some pictures when I got there. :) I was worried about that rain because after some days I was going to another city and my skydive was scheduled. When the big day came, it was not raining, it was a sunny day, but very windy. Of course, they had to cancel my skydive. As I said before, I really wanted to do something remarkable, so when I <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">came</s> went back to Australia I scheduled another <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">skydiving</s> jump (to avoid repeating "skydive" again). Guess what happened? Again, the big day came and the weather was not helping. I was thinking that maybe it was a sign to give up, but <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">before</s> first, I called the agency and they said to go because the weather would be ok. So, I trusted them and I went with my friend, I was very afraid <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">in</s> at that time. When I got <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">in</s> to the place, <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">for</s> to my surprise, the weather was beautiful! It was Valentine's Day in Australia and there was a couple with me <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">in</s> on the airplane. I jumped first, I didn't want that, it was so fast, I didn't have time to think. It was like, "it is your turn now, go" hahahah It was cool, really nice. It <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">can</s> may <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">be</s> come as a surprise <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">for</s> to you, but when I was <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">in</s> on the plane my fear disappeared and I really wanted to jump, the view was amazing, I have no words to describe it. It was so nice, but I didn't want to do it again, the pictures and the video to remember it by, that was enough for me. I was happy until the guy <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">tell</s> told me that my camera DID NOT WORK, can you believe that??? <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">I got</s> This made me sad, I was happy because of the experience, I was alive, but I wanted my pictures and video. :( And one week later I would be back in Brazil. My friend tried to comfort me, but I just said "I am happy, but I could be happier." <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">My</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">luck</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">is</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 194, 102);">that</s> Luckily for me the guy who worked in the agency overheard me and had a good heart. So, he just said "you can jump again if you like and have your photos and video". I didn't think twice, for sure, so I did it again! :P
Great story Mayara! I really liked it!
Note that my comments are based on the way we speak English in the USA.
Bons estudos!