Just make sure you're watching your articles. Even my Russian professor at university has this problem, so you're not alone in it :)

My home town called Irbit. I was born here and grew up here. (if I were writing this, I'd say: "I was born in and grew up in the town of Irbit")The town was founded in the year 1631 and it is located about 250 kilometers from Yekaterinburg by car. Irbit is small town with a population of about 40 thousand people. 

Pleased to meet, you, Diep. Might I make a few corrections?

The mistake you're making consistently is the use of the article "the" in front of things that don't need it. Unlike in other languages, English doesn't use articles a whole lot. You can usually omit them for general topics and abstract concepts like religions, behaviors, etc. I'm sure there's a concrete rule that I never learned—this article might help with knowing when to use them:

https://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/lessons/how-use-articles

A few little tweaks:

As it gets close to the end of the year, I always get nervous, because we Japanese have some customs related to the New Year. The most tiring one for me is cleaning up my house. For the coming new year, we have to make our houses tidy, but I'm not good at cleaning up. The second most tiring one is preparing New Years cards. We have to send New Years cards to our relatives, coworkers and friends. It's a traditional custom, but it takes a long time and makes me bored to write same things I always do. Anyway, in order to have a relaxing and quiet time for the end of year, it's better to start to do those tasks early (?).

Shit dude, you should be seriously proud of your progress in acquiring English; I've read waaaaaay worse compositions by native speakers in uni. I've changed a few words that make it flow a bit better, but there are no actual mistakes other than your use of the present perfect instead of the preterite in the final paragraph. I've also switched two of your verbs to the subjunctive from the indicative—the subjunctive is becoming less and less relevant even in formal writing, but I think that it important to retain its correct usage.

Some would argue that it is preferable for parents to teach their children to be competitive, while others believe that collaboration is a better way to make their sons and daughters positive members of society. While having a competitor's mentality can help a future job seeker, I believe that emphasizing cooperation is a superior option because it allows children to acquire useful social skills.