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There were once two girls who were long time best friends. They had much in common about different topics, and always spent time together. One time, the girls were walking down the street and saw a stunning pair of shoes from D&G, beautifully arranged in the shop window. They fell in love with them and immediately entered the store; unfortunately they were told that the shoes were exclusive, and only came in one size. Upon hearing this, their breathing became shallow as greed overcame them. The assistant witnessed the discord between the two friends. They tore at the shoes and broke the mirror, which cost a lot of money. After their disagreement, the girls become shadows of their former selves. They were hurt, and blamed one another for that quarrel. In the end, the girls understood that they should not give their friendship up because of such silly and small things. After two hours, one of the girls asked for forgiveness, and they promised not to quarrel. Afterwards, the girls went home together. <o:p></o:p>
0 votedNovember 13, 20170My sunday
I like to spend my free time staying active and outdoors, so this sunday, I have chosen to go in to the mountains.
Yesterday, I was on Chufut-Kale, it is an old medieval fortress near Bakhchisaray. Unfortunately, I can show you just only one picture from there, but, if you are interested to know more about it, you can search for information on Google.
It is a cave city which that was built in during the V-Vi centuries and has long history. Over the years, a lot of nationalities have lived there, so now we can see the remains of various cultures in this place. For example, you can walk in old caves from the V century, and afterwards visit the houses of Karaims, dating back to the VIV century.
In my picture, you will see a road in built of rocks, which chariots made used for hundreds of years.
After visiting Chufut-Kale, I decided to go in to Balaklava and Sevastopol. I'll tell you abouurt them next time.
Have a good day ;)Don't worry too much about all the red marks. Most of my corrections were directed at how to make your sentences flow better. One thing that I didn't correct, is the use of roman numerals (ie. V, VI, VIV, etc.). It's usually best to write out the word, unless you have already explained to the audience what the meaning is; this is also the case for using abbreviations or an acronym. For example, 'Jack works for the International Police, also known as Interpol. He has worked there since 1999. His team was recently able to investigate a crime scene dating back to the late eighteenth.' I hope that helps. Great job overall.
0 votedOctober 11, 2013011/06/13
Hello! This is my first letter! Today, I am going to the university! My morning will begin at 9 p.m. At 9.20 p.m, I will sit down in my car and going take my lessons! In the university, I will be very bored and I watch cinema on my computer, after the lesson, my mother and I, will be going shopping! I will buy two pairs of shoes and many small things!i very very tired ,but very happy!!!!!)))))PEACE!!!;)
Good job overall!
0 votedJune 11, 20130Hello :)
Hello! My name is Kristina. I'm from Russia.
I want to learn English. And I can help everyone to learn the Russian language (or I can help everyone/anyone learn Russian).
I'll be happy to talk to everyone :)
You can contact to me: http://vk.com/id12552177
Skype: kristinity_Excellent job!
0 votedFebruary 22, 20130tours
Today we went on tour the in a small city. We reached it by the bus named "pazic". The trip took 3 hours to arrive there and 3 back. It was tiresome. Fortunately, our theatrical performance was a success:)
I changed "the" to "a", because you didn't mention a specific city.
Was the name of the bus "pazic"?
Good job nevertheless.
0 votedFebruary 8, 20130
