11/06/13
Hello!It is my first letter!Today i going to university!My morning begin in 9 p.m. In 9.20 p.m. i sit down in my car and going in lessons!In university me will very boring and i see cinema in my computer,often lesson i and my mother going to shopping!i bay two shoes and many small things!i very very tire,but z very happy!!!!!)))))PEACE!!!;)
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11/06/13
Hello!. This is my first letter!.Today, i going to university!. My morning will begin at 9 a.m. At 9.20 a.m. i will sit down in my car and go to take my lessons!. In the University, i will be very boring and i watch movies on my computer. After lesson, my mother and i will go shopping!. I will buy a pair of shoes and many small things!. I will feel very very tired ,but very happy!!!!!)))))PEACE!!!;)
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11/06/13
Hello! This is my first letter! Today, I am going to the university! My morning will begin at 9 p.m. At 9.20 p.m, I will sit down in my car and going take my lessons! In the university, I will be very bored and I watch cinema on my computer, after the lesson, my mother and I, will be going shopping! I will buy two pairs of shoes and many small things!i very very tired ,but very happy!!!!!)))))PEACE!!!;)
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