This was mostly pretty easy to understand even with a few mistakes here and there. The sentence that really did not make sense is "so I mean why he said that". It's very confusing in this context. You might want to try something simpler like "He said that when one of the waiters asked....ect." Also you CAN actually say "so tasty", but in this context it sounds strange and awkward so it would be better to say "really tasty" or "very tasty".
Journal for London First day...
It is my third time
coming to London. London is not too far from Manchester , I think.
It takes about 2hours and half to get
to London from Manchester, but if you come to London by train, It won’t be cheap for poor students .
So this time ,I come with my roommate ,who is from china. It is our first trip to travel somewhere .
Today, we went to watch the musical called the phantom of
the opera, but I was so sleepy because I slept only about 2 hours last night .
Additionally, the musical was quite interesting , although it was so difficult that I couldn’t understand all of
the story, nevertheless I could enjoy it ,that’s why It must be a decent musical.
Afterward, we went to
a Chinese restaurant, which is also my roommate’s recommendation, and then ordered three meals, which included mapo doufu.
It was tasty for me, but a bit spicy… Otherwise, for my roommate it was salty and bland.
He said that when one of waiters asked him about these meals. If I were him, I would
have said it was
very tasty, but I realised it
would not be good for them.
In that situation , I reckoned I
had to
give my honest opinion , they don’t seek
a fake opinion to make them happy at that moment.
Anyway, I really enjoyed the
first day in London, tomorrow I’m going to Birmingham to meet my friend, who is also from china .
It will be the first meeting between me and him in a long time.
I hope I will write about my journal from now on.
See you then!!!
