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Nowadays, China has the biggest and the fastest high-speed railway system in the world. The speed of trains will continue to climb up and more high-speed railway stations will be built around the country.

Compared to planes, the great advantage of the high-speed railway system is its low dependance on the weather conditions and traffic. The lifestyle of Chinese has been significantly changed by the high-speed railway system. These days it has become the first choice of transportation whenever people travel for business or go on holiday. More and more people have trips on they holidays throughout high-speed railways. There are also many young people who live outside the city and go to work by high-speed railway trains.

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