At present , China has the biggest and fastest high-speed railway net in the world. The speed of this high-speed railway will continue to climb and high -speed railway stations will be built in more cities. Compared to planes, the high-speed railway is just as fast (this was a confusing sentence. I couldn't understand what you meant so I kind of guessed) because it is mostly unaffected by the weather or traffic. The lifestyle of Chinese was changed a lot by the high-speed railway. Today, it has become the first choice of transportation when people travel for business or go on a trip. More and more people go on trips during their holidays using high-speed railways. There are also many young people who live near cities and go to work by high-speed railway.

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Nowadays, China has the biggest and the fastest high-speed railway system in the world. The speed of trains will continue to climb up and more high-speed railway stations will be built around the country.

Compared to planes, the great advantage of the high-speed railway system is its low dependance on the weather conditions and traffic. The lifestyle of Chinese has been significantly changed by the high-speed railway system. These days it has become the first choice of transportation whenever people travel for business or go on holiday. More and more people have trips on they holidays throughout high-speed railways. There are also many young people who live outside the city and go to work by high-speed railway trains.

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