房子-买还是不买呢？

读者可以理解每个句子想要表达的意思，不会造成沟通歧义。可以提高的方面是：表达上略微有些生硬；如果可以注意到前后的逻辑关系会更好哟~加油！

I can understand every sentence, getting all you want to express. Ambiguity is avoiding, which is wonderful. What you can improve is to smooth the way of expression and draw more attention on the logic.

I believe your writing will be more perfect! Let's nail it together. 

我的观点：从人生的自由和灵活性角度来说，我也认为买房不是一个明智的选择。高额房价所催生的长期贷款，使人在决定买下的那一刻就成为房奴，二三十年为房子打工，如你所说”一生都被捆绑在一处“，实为憋屈。不过对中国人来说，固定、安稳的生活仍然使大部分人的刚需。而一个房子，就是安定生活的标配。所以买不买房，还是决定于自己的价值观和生活方式。买与不买，均有利弊，就看哪个选择更匹配自己的人生。

From the perspective of liberty and flexibility of life, I agree the idea that buying a house that beyond our affordability is not wise. High house price leads to long-time loan, one can be a mortgage slave as soon as he decides to buy some house. And without doubt, working for the house during next 20-30 years. Just as you say:"The man would be tied up on one place during almost all his life if buying a house". It is  really depressed. Yet, to most of the Chinese, a stable life is still a must. And a house is always being thinked of the necessity of the life labelled as stable. So, to buy or not to buy a house totally decides on the value and lifestyle of ourselves. It always exists pros and cons on buying or not buying. All we need to check is which one can better match to our own life. 

That's my point. Feel happy to discuss. Glad if you correct it or comment. : )