房子-买还是不买呢？
买房子对我来说太高估了。付两套房的钱然后只有一套到手 没有商业意识。我凭什么要对抵押当奴隶 而且绑我一生在一个位置。反过来说，我买了房, 结果估计得花很长时间在路上去上班。用一个投资观点来看，在波士顿房地产落后于股市 （ 36% vs 57%， 前五年）。 我租房和骑自行车上班。我重视我的时间和生活经历，而不是拥有东西。我爱自由。
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房子-买还是不买呢？
对我来说我支付不起买房子的费用/买房子对我来说太不切实际了。付两套房的钱然后只有一套到手，没有商业意识。我凭什么要成为房子的奴隶 而且束缚我一辈子。反过来说，我买了房, 结果估计得花很长时间在去上班的路上。用一个投资观点来看，在波士顿房地产落后于股市 （ 36% vs 57%， 前五年）。 我租房和骑自行车上班。我重视我的时间和生活经历，而不是拥有东西。我爱自由。
请回答：
1. 我也想知道你是怎么想的
2. 如果有兴趣可以把这段翻译成英文
感谢你的批改和评论
Property-Buy or not?
It is not affordable for me to buy a property. Paying the price for two properties but only get one, it doesn't in accordance with commercial awareness. Why should I be a slave of a house and it will restrict me all my life? On the other hand, if I buy a property, I had to spend a long time on the way to my company. From a perspective of investment, the real estate industry leave behind the stock market ( 36% vs 57% in the first five years) in Boston. I rent a house and ride a bicycle to the company. I value my time and life experience rather than own a property. I love freedom.
Most Chinese people love to invest in real estate even the price goes higher and higher. I live in Sydney and the price of buying a property is much expensive than other cities. I agree with your idea and I don't want to be restricted by loan, but there are some economic benefits for buying a property. First, it can be used in property tax deduction. Second, it should be considered that the price of rent is expensive as well. Third, when I rent an apartment, it was not allowed to have a pet in the house, sometimes you can't use the kitchen and you can only use the washing machine once a week, also sometimes they deduct the bond with no reason. Buying a property means you could have more freedom in the house.
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房子-买还是不买呢？
买房子对我来说太高估了（对我来说，房子超出了我的购买能力）。按现在的市价，付两套房的钱然后却只有一套到手，这样做没有商业意识。我凭什么要对抵押当奴隶（做房奴）？而且绑我一生在一个位置（让我一生被捆绑在一个地方）。反过来说，我买了房，结果估计得花很长时间在路上去上班（上班却需要花更多通勤时间）。用一个投资观点来看，在波士顿房地产落后于股市 （ 36% vs 57%， 前五年）（语句较通顺，但与前后文无逻辑关系）。 我决定租房和，并骑自行车上班。因为我重视更看重我的时间和生活经历，而不是拥有东西（房产/资产）。我爱自由。读者可以理解每个句子想要表达的意思，不会造成沟通歧义。可以提高的方面是：表达上略微有些生硬；如果可以注意到前后的逻辑关系会更好哟~加油！
I can understand every sentence, getting all you want to express. Ambiguity is avoiding, which is wonderful. What you can improve is to smooth the way of expression and draw more attention on the logic.
I believe your writing will be more perfect! Let's nail it together.
我的观点：从人生的自由和灵活性角度来说，我也认为买房不是一个明智的选择。高额房价所催生的长期贷款，使人在决定买下的那一刻就成为房奴，二三十年为房子打工，如你所说”一生都被捆绑在一处“，实为憋屈。不过对中国人来说，固定、安稳的生活仍然使大部分人的刚需。而一个房子，就是安定生活的标配。所以买不买房，还是决定于自己的价值观和生活方式。买与不买，均有利弊，就看哪个选择更匹配自己的人生。
From the perspective of liberty and flexibility of life, I agree the idea that buying a house that beyond our affordability is not wise. High house price leads to long-time loan, one can be a mortgage slave as soon as he decides to buy some house. And without doubt, working for the house during next 20-30 years. Just as you say:"The man would be tied up on one place during almost all his life if buying a house". It is really depressed. Yet, to most of the Chinese, a stable life is still a must. And a house is always being thinked of the necessity of the life labelled as stable. So, to buy or not to buy a house totally decides on the value and lifestyle of ourselves. It always exists pros and cons on buying or not buying. All we need to check is which one can better match to our own life.
That's my point. Feel happy to discuss. Glad if you correct it or comment. : )
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