Letter: There have   has been some problems with the bus service.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about the bus service in my area, because in the last two weeks the bus driver do did not observe the timetable. Consequently, this situation has created some problems with my commuting.

Your services had not worked very well in the last period for two different reasons. Firstly, the bus's ses timetable on your website reports the wrong times and in addition to this  the bus arrives at a different time every morning. Secondly, I have noticed that in the last few weeks the number of busses which run in my area had decreased. Finally I want to add that sometimes the bus drivers are not much very polite towards passengers.

This situation annoys me because I usually arrive too late at my workplace and my manager told me that I will potentially be to dismissed if the situation does not improve. Furthermore, my children also have some problems with the busses when they come back from school.

I believe that your company should update the online timetable and add other rides in my district.
In conclusion, I would like to suggest that the personnel manager should teach politeness to the drivers.

I thank you in advance, and I look forward to receiving a positive feedback on my complains.

Your faithfully,
Peter Parker

Zumba

I want to exercise through dancing.
I found a Zumba class near my house and it was cheaper than I thought!
So, I will go to for the experience from now.
I'm looking forward to it.

A Book I Read

I'm talking about a book which I had formerly read that was written by George Orwell, its name is 1984. 1984 is kind of an utopian novel. It illustrates a scenario of nightmare in the future.
A totalitarian world order, in which individuality is destroyed, mind is taken of control of and people are transformed into mechanised masses is fictionalised in the novel with an incredible imagination in the finest detail. It is a realistic novel as much as it is an utopian novel.
I liked it too much a lot and I think most people like it.

*Note: too much is a quantifier used for excess and is usually used as a negative meaning.

e.g. I had too much cake.

a lot/ very much is better quantifiers for indicating positive big amounts, be it emotions, food etc.

IETS task1

The pie chart contains information about the water used by six major areas in the world for different reasons.

Except for North America and Europe, the water used for agriculture accounts for more than 70% in most of the six areas. Industrial use of water is the highest in North America and Europe.

The reasons for the amount of water used are very similar in North America and Europe. Industrial use accounts for 48% in North America, which is 5% less than usage in Europe. The water used in agriculture takes up 39% and 32% respectively. Water used for domestic purposes is 13% in North America and the amount in Europe is 2% higher than in North America.

The water used for domestic purposes is 19% in South America, which is the highest in all six areas. In South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, the water of agricultural use is nearly twice as high as the amount in North America and Europe. The amount of water used by industry in these four areas are below 12%.

Spring

I want someone to teach me english. I will write something.
Today, the climate weather is not good. It is cloudy and it is going to rain.
Unfortunately, I didn't take an umbrella.😥
Spring has come. Many beautiful flowers are blooming, making me excited, but sometimes spring is as cold as winter.😨
Compared to spring, I like fall more.😃

Note: weather is used to describe temperature, rainfall etc. today, while climate is used to describe the weather of an area over a long period of time.

Beautiful picture! I hope the corrections help.

Bizarre name.

In Japan, a bizarre name is called a kirakira name.
It is very unique, overly decorated and hard to read.
Some parents give their children such names.
It has invited criticism.
When parents name their children, the children cannot understand the meaning of the names and reject it.
Some people say that a child who is given a bizarre name will be made fun of in their school and in their office in the future.
Recently I heard news about a boy having a bizarre name.
His name is Oujisama, Prince.
He is a high school student and has suffered an unpleasant thing due to the name.
He applied at a family court to change of his name from Oujisama to a usual name before he enters a university, and the court approved the change.

March 11, 2019

I felt really bad and as a result, I was in my bed for almost all of today. I didn't want to eat rice, so I ate an ice cream. I knew that eating an ice cream wasn't the best way to get energy, but chewing food was really hard for me.

A situation when I did not have enough time (Please help me correct it!)

I would like to talk about a time when I did not have enough time to make a new PPT (PowerPoint) for our business plan.

About one years ago, I was working in Myanmar with my boss who was also my teacher in screen writing. On that day, we had to prepare a new PPT for the meeting the next day, but the problem was that our PPT designer couldn't make a new one because of an illness.

My boss decided to let me have a try and he believed that I could make a good presentation. I had done some PPT during university, but I did not have enough experience, which led to low efficiency.

I spent the whole night without sleeping, trying to finish it. The Next morning, we showed the new PPT to our investors and they were satisfied with our PPT and business plans, which really made me proud and happy.