Letter: There have been some problems with the bus service.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the bus service in my area because in the last two weeks the bus rides do not observe the timetable. Consequently, this situation has created some problems with my commuting.
Your services have not worked very well in the last period for two different reasons. First, the busses timetable on your website reports wrong time and every morning the bus arrive at a different time as well. Second, I have noticed that in the last weeks the number of the busses which run in my area are decreased. I finally want to add that some time the bus drivers are not much polite towards passengers.
Unluckily, this situation annoy me because I usually arrive too late to workplace and my manager told me that I will be able to dismissed if the situation do not improve. Furthermore, my children have some problems with the busses when they come back from school.
I believe that your company should update the online timetable and add other rides in my district.
In conclusion, I would suggest you that the personnel manager should teach politeness to your drivers.
I thank you in advance, and I look forward to receiving a positive feedback on my complains.
Your faithfully,
Peter Parker
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Letter: There have been some problems with the bus service.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the bus service in my area because in the last two weeks the bus rides do not have not observed the timetable. Consequently, this situation has created some problems with my commuting.
Your services have not worked very well in the this last period for two different reasons. First, the bus timetable on your website reports is wrong time and every morning the bus arrives at a different time as well. Second, I have noticed that in the last weeks the number of the busses which run in my area are decreased. I Finally I want to add that some time sometimes the bus drivers are not much polite towards passengers.
I believe that your company should update the online timetable and add other rides in my district.
In conclusion, I would suggest you that the personnel manager should teach politeness to your the drivers.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Parker
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Letter: There have has been some problems with the bus service.
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to complain about the bus service in my area, because in the last two weeks the bus driver do did not observe the timetable. Consequently, this situation has created some problems with my commuting.
Your services had not worked very well in the last period for two different reasons. Firstly, the bus's ses timetable on your website reports the wrong times and in addition to this the bus arrives at a different time every morning. Secondly, I have noticed that in the last few weeks the number of busses which run in my area had decreased. Finally I want to add that sometimes the bus drivers are not much very polite towards passengers.
This situation annoys me because I usually arrive too late at my workplace and my manager told me that I will potentially be to dismissed if the situation does not improve. Furthermore, my children also have some problems with the busses when they come back from school.
I believe that your company should update the online timetable and add other rides in my district.
In conclusion, I would like to suggest that the personnel manager should teach politeness to the drivers.
I thank you in advance, and I look forward to receiving a positive feedback on my complains.
Your faithfully,
Peter Parker
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