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- Please correct my sentences
Practice makes perfect that's why I try to start writing.
Life is process
Process for learning
Learning to be better than the previously time
Learn Everything
Not only about writing and reading, but also <strike>whatever</strike> about life
If we just focus on writing and reading
Then we are still a student
Just studying to get a score in order to <strike>we can</strike> graduate <strike>from it</strike>
Yeah, mostly in our mind SCORE, sometimes how to get it we don't care (our mind is on the score and we don't care how we get it)
It's really different if we are learning.
Learning is about everything including RESPECT another people whether they are our friends or not <strike>close with us</strike>
In learning, we must be brave to challenge our limits, not <strike>to</strike> run away from someone just because we don't want them to see that we have shortcomings.
Indeed,this is our right to choose everything but I think If we only want to seem perfect. It's just cheating ourselves.
#1stDay0 votedNovember 5, 20181 - My first travel for me when I was 14 years old, me and my family we want to Egypt . We went there <strike>to get same fun</strike> for vacation. The trip was very long , first we rode the pilot and took two hours until arrival . And then we took car from the airport to Sohag and took two hours, after that we booked a hotel to eat food and sleep. The next day we go another area called Hurghada we took 4 hours to arrive, we were so tired. After that we took another hotel to eat and to get some sleep. And after resting we went the sea and played and had fun. We stayed in Egypt for two weeks.
I traveled for the first time when I was 14 years old. My family and I went to Egypt for vacation. It took a long time to get there. First, we flew for 2 hours to the airport in Sohag. Then we rented a car and drove for two more hours and stayed in a hotel for the night. The next day we drove 4 hours to Hurghada. We were very tired, so we stayed in another hotel. After resting, we went to the sea and played and had fun. We stayed in Egypt for two weeks.
Keep practicing! It's so hard writing in another language but you are doing well!0 votedNovember 4, 20181 - Do you know about Culebra, Puerto Rico?
Culebra is a small island located in the Caribbean and is part of Puerto Rico. To arrive there, you need to arrive first in Puerto Rico and then take a ship or airplane to get there. The island is magical, beautiful and has some of the best beaches in the world. The island has approximately 10 beaches, and I recommend that you go to all of them. The most famous is Flamenco Beach (you can find videos and good information on the internet). I visited the island in 2014 and was awesome. Ifyou love the beach, sun, water, eating and drinking with friends or family or alone, this is an excellent destination. When I arrived, I rented a Jeep to get around on the island, but some people rent a golf cart <strike>to enjoy more.</strike> I stayed for 5 days in the house, with a great view of the beach. I bought food in a supermarket to cook in the house and enjoyed the beaches and family all day. I love the sand, water and of course, I love to snorkel. I snorkeled for long hours with protection and I could see turtles, rare fishes, corals, <strike>and the most important things; the sunse</strike>t My favorite thing to see was the sunsets. At night, I went to parties on the island or in the beach. In my experience, I enjoyed it a lot, and I would like to go there again for and spend more time there. I recommended that you visit the island and fins out for yourself how wonderful it is. So one question: Is Culebra in your travel plans? Let's go!0 votedNovember 2, 20182 - This is a story about a delivery I made. I had to go to a building that was 10 stories for the delivery. The customer was living on 7th floor. When I got to the front of the building the door was closed. I walked around the building. There were 3 doors but all of the doors were closed and there were no intercoms. I waited in front of the door for a second. Luckily, a stranger came. I was able to go into the building.
Good job! A few mistakes but I was still able to understand your story.0 votedOctober 29, 20181

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