My Trip

I went on my first trip when I was 14 years old. My family and I went to Egypt. We went there to have same fun. The trip was very long. First we went by plane and it took us two hours to arrive. Then we took car from the airport to Sohag. The ride lasted for two hours. After that we booked a hotel to eat food and sleep in. The next day we went to another area, his name Hurghada, and it took us 4 hours to arrive. I was so tired. After that we went to another hotel to eat and to get some sleep. And After the break we went to the beach and played and get same had much fun there. We stayed in Egypt for two weeks.

My first travel for me when I was 14 years old, me and my family we want to Egypt . We went there to get same fun for vacation. The trip was very long , first we rode the pilot and took two hours until arrival . And then we took car from the airport to Sohag and took two hours, after that we booked a hotel to eat food and sleep. The next day we go another area called Hurghada we took 4 hours to arrive, we were so tired. After that we took another hotel to eat and to get some sleep. And after resting we went the sea and played and had fun. We stayed in Egypt for two weeks.

I traveled for the first time when I was 14 years old. My family and I went to Egypt for vacation. It took a long time to get there. First, we flew for 2 hours to the airport in Sohag. Then we rented a car and drove for two more hours and stayed in a hotel for the night. The next day we drove 4 hours to Hurghada. We were very tired, so we stayed in another hotel. After resting, we went to the sea and played and had fun. We stayed in Egypt for two weeks. 

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My travel

My first travel for me when I was 14 years old, me and my family we want to Egypt . We go there to get same fun. The trip was very long , first we rode the pilot and took two hours until arrival . And then we took car from the airport to Sohag and took two hours, after that we booked a hotel to eat food and sleep. Next day we go another area. The name of that place was Hurghada. we took 4 hours to arrive, was so tired. After that we took another hotel to eat and to get some sleep. And after brake we go to the sea and played and get some fun. We were in Egypt for two weeks.

I was 14 years old when I traveled for the first time. My family and I, we went to Egypt. We went there for fun (vacation). It takes long time to get there. First by airplane and then with 2 hours driving a car.... Actually there is more easy problems that I will correct for you later. I've got to go now. See you soon. By the way very good try. Please continue to write. It's really help and I will help you too. Regards.