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writing practice
The diagram illustrates the cycle of the salmon in their lives from eggs to maturity.
There are several stages in their life cycle from birth to adults. in three distinct locations as They develop in three distinct locations, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then back to the river again.
The salmon begin their lives in rivers where they lay eggs and incubate them. After emerging from eggs hatching, they are reared in the freshwater zone. Then, at some point in their development, they swim downstream to estuary areas where rearing continues.
The salmon in the zone for estuary then migrate to the ocean where they eventually become fully grown adults. The adult salmon will then move upstream to the spawning area in the rivers again, where they reproduce and lay eggs. These adult salmon lay eggs again, and The eggs then begin to live follow the same cycle which is repeated continuously.Hope it helps!
0 votedOctober 22, 20180Could you please check my writing?
Every time I write my texts in English, I need a textbook and a dictionary.
My English keyboard helps my spelling skill very much.
Supposing If I don't use it, I wonder whether I will write texts understandably correctly.
Generally speaking, English is similar to but easier than German but easier.
My German might be helpful my English.
I wish I could speak English well.
Needless to say, however hard it is, I'll do my best.
Could you please check my writing? Thank you.Hope it helps!
0 votedOctober 21, 20181Relaxed time for me
Yesterday, I went to a spa which had a lot of bathes and saunas with my friends.
I can took various bathes and saunas to sweat a lot. I felt relaxed with closing when I close my eyes and forgetting the daily hard work.
Besides In addition, my skin could get smooth too.
A lot of people came to the spa. Japanses Japanese people liked taking bathes a long time ago. At the present day Nowadays, I thought everyone was tired from everyday daily work and they needed healing to recuperate. So, they come to the spa to spend the relaxed time.
There are a lot of stresses in daily life, but I am pleased that there is a culture of taking bath in Japan.Hope it helps!
0 votedOctober 21, 20180JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.21th
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.21th
These days, I am just thinking though, about how people all over the world listen to some music they like on some streaming service, rather than on iPod or a radio. For me honestly, I was also prefer the latter person, actually. However, one day, Amazon mailed me that I would get some benefit if I started using Amazon music. Basically, I am people has old thinkings conventional so I wouldn't use streaming services instead of that, I would use my iPod at the end of the day. At first, I won't didn't start using Amazon music of course, but then I am not usual me curious. Yes, I would start try this! I feel like so strange at first, but gradually I had noticed of the good points about this service. Maybe I would never go back to my ipod..this service is so beneficial to meeeeHope it helps!
0 votedOctober 21, 20181A vocal competition
I am watching a vocal competition on TV now.
It is a popular TV program so I have been watching it all the time.
All of the participants in the competition are foreigners.
They are singing the Japanese pop music in Japanese.
I am always amused with their songs singing.
I am impressed by it.
Could you please check my writing? Thank you.For the second last sentence, are you amused by the songs or by the foreigners singing?
I assume the latter here.
Hope it helps!
0 votedOctober 20, 20183Correct my English, please
My room is very often the source of my inspiration. There It is not just a place where I can relax, it is also a place where I can calmly work. After all, I know for sure that no one will disturb me here. In addition, my room is equipped furnished according to my taste. Many things in the room give it a creative out a personal charm and it inspires me.
My room is spacious and bright. As you first come into my room, in front of the window is my desktop. There are brushes, paints, albums and other art supplies around, so it's a bit cluttered. Next to the desktop there is my bed. There are a lot of pillows and a fluffy carpet underneath. They create a feeling of warmth and comfort. I also have a wardrobe and a bookcase. On the walls, there is a big huge variety of pictures that adds a lot of character to the room.
No doubt, my room is perfect for me.Hope it helps!
0 votedOctober 20, 20181Public health
It’s widely believed that developing public health plays a vital role in the whole society. There is a debate about whether increasing sports facilities or taking other measures is the most effective way to improve public health. From my point of perspective view, increasing sports facilities and taking other measures are equally essential is one solution but not the only solution.
First, a few reasons can be found to support increasing facilities is to improve public health. One reason is that it develops people’s physical fitness and leads to a healthy lifestyle. This is because there are With so many professional equipment and companions, we can gain scientific training as well as mutual supervision. To be specific, children can go to the swimming pool with their parents or friends in the evening. It will help them shape their body. In addition, we can also have improve our resilience and toughness by constantly being active. Devoting time to these equipment is the best way to improve public health.
However, it does not automatically mean that building sports places facilities is the only way to improve public health. After all, it is a financial burden for the government to establish many a lot of sports facilities. In this case, taking other measures like education or technology may be more money-saving financially sustainable. Teaching people about health can help them cultivate good personal hygiene. With environmental pollution and food safety becoming much severer issues today, we need to focus more on our own habits to ensure our health. And On the technology side, inventing new machines can also protect people against various diseases. For example, aging people are weak and vulnerable. If they do not keep take medicines when they are uncomfortable regularly, they may become apoplectic or even died one day. Therefore, taking other measures can also improve public health.
In conclusion, both ways of improving public health offer advantages to people. In my opinion, both are equally beneficial. Developing athletic facilities more directly improves physical fitness, and other measures while education and technology influence us subliminally.Hope I helped!
0 votedOctober 20, 20180Adding on Ms. Mina's correction above
I bought a Nintendo Switch last month on Amazon, I had been wanted wanting this kind of game because my friends have it and told me that it is totally entertaining. The This kind of game help our lifestyles to be better, yes it is possibly much more saying (not sure what you mean here?) but I am thinking it is true, of course. The switch has two controllers to play video games in just only one the switch When you buy a Nintendo Switch, you get two controllers, you know? This point is really attractive to me. We had to bring the video game we have like Gameboy in many years before, but now, thanks to Nintendo Switch, we are able to play the video game together if someone have has just one Nintendo Switch. And there is another reason why I am thinking it is so attractive game to Switch. I can play games such as Mario Cart or Smash Brothers, something like that on my bed, or just lying down or in the style of lay. Up to now, when I wanted to play Mario cart, we have had to turn on the Wii.
Hope I made it better!
0 votedOctober 20, 20182Could anyone correct this?
Hi! I signed up for this today.This is an introduce introduction about me to write in my profile. Could anyone can help correct this? Especially I'm really confused with articles like 'a' and 'the'.
How are you? I’m Jenna from Seoul.
After graduating from university here, I’m currently working for an international company as an admin.
When I’m working, I often came across situations where I should speak in English. But whenever I speak in English, I’m almost freezing I froze up and getting get too nervous, because I didn’t have many opportunities to speak in English. so My writing is okay, but I’m not confident in speaking in English. This is why I communicate with many a lot of friends who are interested in learning Korean language. I guess most people who want to learn English are also very interested in Korean culture or celebrity. You can ask me whatever you’d like to know about Korea. Let’s study together :)
Hope I helped!
0 votedOctober 19, 20181
