could you help with my english sentences?
hello!
l have some english sentences that needs corrections.
Could you check and correct them ?
thank you!
1. there is a small garden, a
t our house as well. we have some trees in the garden and we get
fruit from the trees every year.
2. as soon as l enter my house, l can see
the living room, with a TV and a couch.
3. my room
on second floor is the
most special room
to me.
4. l think
the 2nd floor is the special
to me.
5. it's not perfect, but it's ok.
6.
I got pocket money for tidying up when I was little7.
He has so many songs, and they're all so good!8. l remember going to a
Bigbang concert at
the olympic stadium with my friends
a year ago.9. since they have tons of fans from all over the world, the concert was very crowded
with many people, and the fans were screaming during the concert.
10. it was quite overwheming and really cheered
me up, and made me want to dance.
11. first thing every morning l turn on the bluetooth speaker.
12. l always listen to music whenever l take
public transport13. l like that place because of the good atmosphere and the food is also really good.
14. l can't sleep after watching horror movies
15. l purchased a ticket 30 minutes before the movie started.
16. l like to check out some gourmet restaurants.
17. l recommend you try them when you visit Hongkong.
18. l was very excited to get on an airplane.
19. we rented a car so it was easier to move from place to place. we ate many mandarines, and rice cakes that are famous on Jeju island.
20. we watched some movies, and went to a sauna.
21. l'm especially good at making kimchi stew.
22. there was something wrong with the food l had that day.
23. l had to go to a hospital and I had to take medicine.
24. l remember staying at home during the last vacation a few weeks ago.
keep up the good work!