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Hello! Nice to meet you, my native language is Chinese, and I would like to learn English and Japanese. My goal is to use them fluently and be able to express abstract conception more accurately, include reading and communicating with native speakers. About English, my grammar and pronunciation are basic, and probably makes lots of mistake on it, as compared to grammar, my reading is better, I can think in English when I’m reading, but when it comes to express myself like talking or writing, I can’t switch it from Chinese to English, that’s my problem. About Japanese, I’m a beginner. Just as much as I have learned the Gojūon. If you are learning Chinese, I can share some opinion about it, I have got literary award in school, so I have a little confidence about it. But my suggestion is just one of comprehensive possibilities. Very nice to meet you, and thanks for reading.
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    中国在能源世界地图上 (中国于全球能源版图的发展)

    从21世纪初亚太地区在全球经济的作用开始快速地提升。人口众多的亚太地区作用的变化让经济世界地图、以及与之有关的能源世界地图改变。(人口眾多的亞太地區作用並改變著世界經濟以及與之有關的世界能源版圖。)由于按照经济预报大部分亚太地区国家的经济继续快速度增长,它们的在世界动力的作用、对世界能源市场的影响会再加强。(她(他)(它)们对世界能源市场的影响力与推动的作用将会增强)面对经济的持续高速发展,中国对世界能源的发展趋势、结构和技术影响也加强,中国能源政策的变化引起国外市场的剧烈的反应。

    中国在崛起为世界性大国的路途上,需要大量能源,从2000年以来,中国的能源消耗快速的增长,中国已成为世界上能源消费最大的国家,中国本身能源资源难以自足,为了满足经济发展的需求,必须积极从外国进口石油、天然气等能源产品。常规的进口通道是(由or自(from))中东经马六甲海峡(,經or通)过南海(再(then))从东南进入中国,在能源消耗增长的、未来能源新技术开发不确定的条件下(在能源消耗的持续增長以及未来可能的新的能源开发技术的不确定条件下),拓宽能源进口多样化成为必然趋势(拓宽与多样化能源进口成为必然趋势)。为保证本国能源进口(的)持续性和多样化,中国要加强与俄罗斯等“一带一路”沿线国家的能源合作,这样有利于保障中国(的)能源安全。

    Hello! It's a good try,By the way, the second paragraph is fluently than first paragraph~

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    October 4, 2018
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    Hello! nice to meet you! the question is simple but also a comprehensive issue. 「嗯」can have many different meaning, it's kind of exclamative particles, but the word「exclamative particles」(感嘆詞) is a profession word for non-native Chinese learner or used for linguistics. Native speaker often use them in ordinary life but doesn't realize it, but if used them fluently it would be naturally for listener. Èn, 好吃 → Mm, very tasty = it's a kind of onomatopoeia and just to express that the food is yummy. Or in some situation, it would have meaning of ''I'm thinking'' or ''I'm considering ''、''I understand'' in different tones. It's a common exclamative particles. And here's an example that uses lots of「exclamative particles」:「相聲」、「相声」,it's like Stand-up comedian with one person or two people: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mbJL_sF3fS4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbPij3laHkw
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    October 4, 2018
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    1.我爸爸是生意人。有一天我问他,他怎么获得成功了(他是怎么(如何)获得成功的)。他坦率地回答:“我生活中遵守三个规则(我在生活中遵守三个规则)。第一个是,无论环境多么恶劣,千万别抱怨命运。第二个是,别叫人当上(别上别人的当)。第三个是,自己感觉难受的话,并不要让周围人感受你不好的心态(不要让周围人感受到你不好的心态)。你记住,获得成功不仅要努力工作,也要培养性格。” 2.“你嫁给我吗?” (你愿意嫁给我吗?)这句话让全世界的女人兴奋极了。她们都从小就梦想举行豪华的婚礼。可是最近10年昂贵的婚礼不流行。现代结婚越朴素越好,并且庆会后极其重要去旅行(并且庆会后旅行极为重要),否则结婚不合时尚。 3.我是一个认真的员工。我每次面对烦恼的事情时,我于处问题集中全注意力(我集中所有的注意力在問題上面),空闲时间还是继续考虑下去办法(空闲时间还是继续思考处理办法)。如果办不了由我承担的业务,我就灰心散手。老板建议我上班时多跟熟练员工交流经验,回家后多休息。
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    October 2, 2018
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    lost on Journey in Japan JR班次因為颱風大亂,坐到元町站後停站延誤一小時,整車的人都下去了,像屍速列車一樣,只好坐捷運去三ノ宮再到新神戶,再搭新幹線到新大阪駅,到站後只有六分鐘時間換乘到京都駅,京都駅寄放行李箱都滿了,所以以兩千日圓寄放在百貨公司那,結果買了一個行李箱後發現滿五千日圓可以免費寄放。 本來可以坐JR一路從神戶垂水站坐到京都的,搞得人在囧途,多花了快兩萬日圓。 Because of the typhoon, JR train shift had been disturbed, when we arrived Motomachi Station, we have delayed for one hour, all passanger of the train have left, just like the movie ''Train To Busan'', so we been forced to took MRT to Sannomiya Station and then went to Shin-kōbe Station, then took Shinkansen to Shin-Ōsaka Station, when we arrived there, we had only six minutes to transfered to Kyoto Station, but when we finally arrrived there, luggage storage of Kyoto Station were all fulled, we spend two thousands yen to posted our baggage in department store consequently, after we bought a suitcase at department store, we then knew that we can get free posting if we purchase at least five thousands yen. Originally, we could took JR all the way from Tarumi Station to Kyoto, but we became ''lost on Journey'' as the result, finally we spend more out of twenty thousands yen then it should be.
    October 2, 2018
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    A briefly self introduction Hello! Nice to meet you, my native language is Chinese, and I would like to learn English and Japanese. My goal is to use them fluently and be able to express abstract conception more accurate, include reading and communicate with native speakers. About English, my grammar and pronunciation are basic, and probably makes lots of mistake on it, compare to grammar, my reading is more better, I can think in English when I’m reading, but when it comes to express myself like talking or writing, I can’t switch it from Chinese to English, that’s my problem. About Japanese, I’m a beginner. Just as much as I have learned the Gojūon. If you are learning Chinese, I can share some opinion about it, I have got literary award in shcool, so I have a little confidence about it. But my suggestion is just one of comprehensive possibility of them. Very nice to meet you, and thanks for your reading.
    October 2, 2018
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  • Corrected

    Hello! nice to meet you! Your grammer is great! Just a little details that are not fluently.

    在我看来,谁都可能学习怎么使用一个电脑。(「可能」is OK, it's means 「probably」or 「possible」, but 「可以」is more appropriate(be able to).)

    Zài wǒ kàn lái, shéi dōu kěnéng xuéxí zěnme shǐyòng yí gè diànnǎo.

    In my opinion, everyone can learn how to use a computer.

    为了学得更多,他决定了减少他的玩电子游戏的时间。(他决定减少他玩电子游戏的时间)(「了」can use in many occasion of sentence,in a sentence, it has same function as 「pause」or 「finished」,but in this part, omit it would be more appropriately, also the 「的」between 「他」and 「玩」(verbs).)

    Wèile xué de gēng duō, tā juédǐng le jiǎnshǎo tā de wán diànzǐ yóuxì de shíjiān. 

    In order to study more, he decided to reduce the time that he plays video games.


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    October 1, 2018
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  • Corrected

    可以这样说吗?

    我把那袋猫粮喂它们 - 我要用“把”, 可以这样说吗?


    可以的,「把」也有取用的意思,不過這句話有一點點不流暢的地方,就是「喂它们」可以改成「喂給它们」,另外「喂給它们」的「它」是用來指「沒有生命的物體」,因此建議可以改成「牠」(用作動物)(因為您是說貓糧,那對象應該是貓咪)。


    It's OK to use 「把」, cause 「把」have one of meaning of '' using'', but there's a little part not fluently, 「喂它们」could modify to 「喂給它们」,「給」means ''to''. In addition, 「它」is use for Non-life, so my suggestion is to use 「牠」(use for animal, cause in the sentence you say cat food.)


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    October 1, 2018
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