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- please check this, " the problem and solutions about the sedentary lifestyle", thank you! Nowadays, with an increasing number of white-collar clerks, the sedentary lifestyle are attaining popular over the world, in despite of a considerable number of sports centers. This essay will discuss the reasons contributed to this situation and the relevant solutions. The overwork and lack of efficiency are considered the important reasons to the sedentary lifestyle. To explain, with a majority percentage of employees working in front of electronic screen, the chair is essential for them. It is obvious that the time they spend on before the screen have close correlation with the amount of workload and their efficiency. To solve this problem, I suppose employees should not work overtime and the professional skills also be improved to save time and therefore people could invest more time in outdoor activities. On the other hand, arranging a sports items into daily schedule could also liberate themselves from stress for a shot time and offer a refreshment which may inspire individual to come up some useful ideas on their subjects when they are stuck in.October 2, 201820
林心给她的弟弟讲了一个亚洲的传说
很久以前, 有一位皇帝听说了有一个厉害的巫婆住在一个他的省份。这名女巫可以看"红线".帝王请了这位巫婆去在王宫。一到女巫到了公城,皇帝就讨她找"红线"因为他想知道哪个女的会是他的妻子。巫婆接受了帝王的要求, 所以开始顺"红线"。他们在一个市场找到了的时候, 那里有个穷的女农民。她有一个幼儿。巫婆请她站好了, 然候告诉化皇帝: "这里, 你的"红线"找到了, 所以我信守了我的承诺"。一到皇帝一听到巫婆说这个句子, 很生气下来得很多。他不能明白为什么他的妻子会是一个穷的女农民。他想起来可能有一个错误。帝王判令一个侍卫杀了女农民。幼儿在地板上掉下了, 出乎她脸上有一块疤。
事隔多年, 一到这位年经的皇帝必须结婚了的时候, 保镖劝勉他应该跟有力的将军的女儿应该结婚了。他收下了他的忠告。一到婚礼的时候, 皇帝第一次会看到他妻子的脸。他一看了她的非常美丽的脸, 突然他就他睬了她脸上有一块疤。
"那, 他的妻子是那个女幼儿的吗?" - 小弟问林心。
"对啊" - 林心回答了他。
"真美丽的传说" - 小弟完结。0 votedOctober 2, 20181湖北马路上装喷水器提醒人们不要闯红灯。
我刚刚看完了一个新闻文章关于有些中国行人过马路的时候就不理红绿灯的新闻文章。 为了避免这有危险的事儿,政府决定了在马路上装喷水器。
对于这个主意我没有特别的看法, 但是我觉得那没有耐心的行人可能就去别的地方过马路,其实这是有更多危险。过马路时行人横道是最安全的地方,而且开车的人就预期行人在人行横道过马路 不在别的地方。 对我来说,如果我在赶去个重要的约会没有时间等绿灯,也不要被水器喷了,我一定就去别的地方过马路!你们呢?
欢迎你们的改正 :)
Thank you :)great job you have done. keep on practice, you can do better!
0 votedOctober 1, 20181- please check it. title " the most serious problems caused by internet." Nowadays, internet has improved individuals’ life quality in a wide range of field such as entertainment, and reading, while some defects of that also come into people’s eye. In the following paragraphs, the most serious problems will be presented and then the solution also be discussed. It is obvious that interne also cause several negative impacts on people’s life. The important one is the students’ addiction of computer game, with the majority of the time spent before electronic screen and considerable money invested in the games. This is a popular phenomena among the students of all ages, no matter in high school or senior school, which will lead to a poor academic performance, bad relationship with their teacher ,and a stressful financial situation. Other problem is the population of home-staying culture, attributed by the increasing number of young people who have a heavy dependent on online shopping and chatting. Those people tend to just stay at home other than take some outdoor activities, since their necessary demands all can be satisfied on internet, leading to a weak physical strength and lack of communication skills.October 1, 201820
题目:共享单车
你们最喜欢怎么在城市里移动(出行)?(you should replace "移动" by "出行“)
开车?打车?坐公地铁?走路?坐火车?坐飞机?划船?
最近几年,在北京很流行新型的交通工具-共享单车。(remove “在”)
为什么共享单车在这里这么受欢迎?
1,非常方便
想(像)北京人口多超大城市里,一年四季去哪儿都不用堵车,不是很神奇吗?更何况,随时多处可以取,可以放的自行车,让人自由地移动(出行)。(you should replace "移动" by "出行“;you should replace "想" by "像“)
2,环保
不用石油,也不用电气,可以保护环境!还可以健身哦!
3,便宜
使用此服务价格在5毛至1元范围内,并且每家公司都会安排各种活动。
最近,在市中心可以看到最多的(单车),有三家公司:摩拜,小黄车,小蓝单车。
最近有件事情让我感到惊奇!
今年夏天在巴黎,我看见了几辆摩拜单车。我想,让(should remove "让”, more native)我试试吧:用我的中国摩拜账户,取一次看看,结果,扫上了,锁开了单车(you should write "单车的锁开了",pay attention to the world order),就是价格已经不是1元了,而是1欧元你写的很棒!只有一些小错误。
0 votedSeptember 29, 20181

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