I work at the zoo.

Hello, I'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 months in the zoo department of a Korean amusement park. My department job title is "expedition leader". By the bus, we show visitors many animals and explain things about them. We also perform a play. In the script setting, amusment visitors are explorers and we're leaders. We go on a expediton to find legendary animals that have disappeared with vast treasure. In this way, we can explain the animals in a more fun way. I love this job that gives interesting animal information and pleasure to children.

But these days, I have a problem. There are many foreign visitors on our ride. In our job manual, if there is at least one Korean person on the bus, we have to explain the animal information in Korean. But if all the people are foreigners, we can use other languages if we can. (In the situation that all the people on the bus are foreigners, we call it "all-in")

So, this "all-in" issue brings me the trouble. I can't explain the animal information fluently in english. I want foreigners to understand what i tell them and to notice when their actions will be dangerous. Can you do me a favor? I want to do my best for all of the people who ride my bus so that they are happy.

First, i want to know what I have to say to stop foreigners from engaging i dangerous actions, and basic ride information. Can you correct these lines in a colloquial style?(and polite , in proper speach to a guest , and simple so that a guest can understand easliy.)

1. Please sit two to a seat so that we can accommodate all of the guests that want to enjoy the tour.

2. The farther back in the bus that you sit, the better your view of the animals will be.

3. Please keep your arms and belongings inside the bus at all times to avoid injury.

4. Don't stand in the aisle. In the event of a sudden stop, it can be dangerous.

5. Please stay seated.

6. Now we are going to feed the giraffes. Do not attempt to touch the animals. Also do not scream please. This will startle the animal.

7. No flash photography please. Please disable your camera's flash.

I want to make a new intersting expedition script in english with you guys. i think i can also tell you interesting stories about my job. Please help me complete these script. and if you can, can you correct this all letter too? it can be so long ... cause I'm talkactive person. if you correcting only above 7 sentance, it also sooooooooooo thanxful. thanks!

Today

I wore a light jacket today. But it was so cold outside. I didn't realize it was going to be freezing cold.

Also, I had my college class. I studied English phrasal verbs. I've taken to use a new app for English speaking. It was very useful.

Right now I have a problem with my home.

The lease end date is coming, but I couldn’t find a new house. So I sometimes think, 'how about living in a guest house with travellers?'

I hope I get a good solution in the near future.

Vacation Part I

Last month my wife and I went on vacation to Prague for 4 days. I booked flight tickets and a hotel room in advance. As our home is not far from the airport, and the latter is a quite small one, we decided to get there as late as possible. Unfortunately, it was raining at the time we had to go and getting a taxi was impossible. Without much hesitation we took our car to get there and parked it at the airport parking lot. From then on, things went pretty smoothly. The flight was pleasant and we got to our hotel by bus very quickly.

Can any one correct me?

Hi, My name is Amirreza. I'm 22 years old. I have years of exprience in sports such as chess, tennis, and also in art, such as painting. I have painted around 50 oil paintings during 3 years of training when I was around 8. But unfourtuntely, I quit this profession after some time, mainly because of losting interest. At the age of 14, I enrolled in an institute to learn English . It took me 6 years to complete all of the courses and get my certification. At the time, when I was 18, I decided to choose Mechanical Engineering as my major while my inner voice always told me to choose Teaching English. But with the insistence of family and whom ever was around me, I was condemned to accept. Although I did perfect at the time when I was at college, I decided to not allow others to take charge of my life. So as you may expect, I changed my major to Teaching English. I was lucky enough to be admitted in one of the best, if not the best, univeristy of Iran, but what was greater and more precious to me was the decision that I made that I will never ever regret. I'm proud of myself in this regard because of all of the inequalites that I passed, all the hardships that I left behind, and all of the hours that I put in, day and night. As for my future professional plan, I really want to become a teacher or an examiner and more specifically in the field of speaking. Because I'm obssesed with speaking English and I never get tired of it. And if you ask me, I can definitely assure you that I developed this skill way better than others. Well, that's the end of my story. Wish me luck and, by the way, just a side note: Never fear and always persevere.

This is my answer for the question posted on the blog by my teacher. Check my grammar, thank you!!

The Climate Strike has drawn much attention since human activities have influenced the environment, and could lead to the change of climate. For example, deforestation is the second leading cause of global warming and produces about 24% of global greenhouse gas emissions; the increasing use of vehicles leads to the rise of greenhouse petroleum emissions. As for the collective action I witnessed last Friday, I think the action is just propaganda, which appealed to people to protect our environment. Some of the participants made posters to reflect the environmental problem related to climate change to use during the activity.

However, I don’t think this kind of collective action (the Climate Strike Rally) can save the world because not everyone who saw this action will fight against the people who damage the environment. Some people may still do things which could lead to environmental degradation and climate change for their profit. For example, loggers need to cut down trees to get money. The essential cause of climate change is human activities. If people continue to do something which could lead to increasing greenhouse emission, the world will never be saved. Although we could have cutting-edge technology which is used to deal with environmental problems, those environmental problems are hard to uproot as long as people are still making bad impacts on the environment. If everyone could make a contribution to environmental protection by picking up a piece of paper, recycling, and taking public transportation, at least our living condition could be improved. While saving the world is not an easy task, collective action is only one part of saving the world.

I think the most helpful thing I can do is learning environmental science, and exploring the best way to deal with climate change and other environmental problems in the future. I hope when I grow up, I can devote myself to solving more environmental problems. I think joining the Global Climate Strike movement is a good beginning for me to protect the environment, I am ready to help the movement anytime.