i am working in the zoo Hello i'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 month in the zoo department of the Korean amusement park. My department worker is named "expedition leader". By the bus, we show visit

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i am working in the zoo Hello i'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 month in the zoo department of the Korean amusement park. My department worker is named "expedition leader". By the bus, we show visitors many animals and explain about them. We are also play a play. In script setting, amusment visitors are explorers and we're leader. We go on a expediton to finding legendary animals disapeared with vast treasure. In this way, we can explain the animal more fun. I love this job that give interesting animal information and pleasure to children. But now days, I have got a problem. There are many foreign visiter in our ride. In our job manual, if there are Koreans at least one person among the bus, we have to explain the animal in Korean. but all the people are foreigner, we can use other languages if we can. (the situation that all he people in the bus are foreigner, we call it "all-in") Right, this "all-in" brings me the trouble. I can't explain animals fluently in english. I want foreigner can understand what i tell and to notice their acting will be dangerous. Can you do me a favor? I want to do my best all people who ride my bus are happy. First, i want to know what I have to say to hold back foreigners dangerous action, and basic ride's information. Can you correct these lines a colloquial style?(and polite , in proper speak to a guest , and simple to guest can understand easliy.) 1. please sit two people on one seat (if one-seat one people, some one should be kicked out of the bus) 2. The more you seat in the back, you can get better sight to watch animals. 3. there are no windows in the bus, if you streched out your hand or you stuff it can be dangerous. 4. Don't stay in the hallway, if happend a sudden stop, it can be dangerous. 5. please keep sitting 6. Now we are going to feeding giraffe Do not touch a giraffe and Do not scream please. You can suprise a giraffe that we have to stop feeding 7. turn off the flash please I want to make a new intersting expedition script in english with you guys. i think i can also tell you interesting stories about my job. Please help me complete these script. and if you can, can you correct this all letter too? it can be so long ... cause I'm talkactive person. if you correcting only above 7 sentance, it also sooooooooooo thanxful. thanks!

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1. Seating is very limited, so please sit two people per one seat if possible. We have no trouble asking “Seat hogs” to leave the bus, so please, do not let this happen to you. (You should smile when saying this last sentence!) (*-^)

2. The closer you sit toward the back, the better chance you will have to see the animals.

3. It is dangerous to put your hands and arms outside the bus. For your safety, please keep them inside at all times.

4. Do not stand in the aisle way, as it may lead to serious injury should a sudden stop occur.

5. We ask that you please remain seated at all times. (This should be No. 4)

6. We will now stop and try to feed the giraffes. Please do not try to touch them, scream, or make other loud noises. If they are frightened, they will not come close enough for us to feed them.

7. You are welcome to take pictures, but if you do, please turn off the flash.

Hi, Nuri. Good job! These instructions will work for your passengers that understand English. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan

I am working in a zoo

Hello i'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 months in the zoo department in a Korean amusement park. My job title(?) is called "expedition leader". From (our) buses, we show visitors many animals and explain about them to them. We are also doing role plays(?). In the scripted setting, amusement park visitors are explorers and we're leaders. We go on a expedition searching for legendary animals that has disappeared with a vast treasure. In this way, we can explain the animals in a more fun/entertaining way. I love this job that gives me interesting animal information and pleasure to children.

But nowadays, I have/I've got a problem. There are many foreign visitors on our rides. In our job manual, it says that if there is even one Koreans at least one person at the bus, we have to explain the animals in Korean. But everyone are foreigners, so we can use other languages if we can. (the situation when all he people in the bus are foreigners, we call it "all-in")

Right, this "all-in" brings me the trouble. I can't explain animals fluently in English. I want the foreigners to understand what i say, and to notify them when their behavior are dangerous. Can you do me a favor? I want to do my best to ensure that all people who ride my bus are happy.

First, I want to know what I have to say to stop foreigners' dangerous behavior, and give basic ride's information. Can you correct these lines a colloquial style? (and polite and proper phrasing for addressing a guest , and simple so the guest can understand easily.)

1. Please sit in pairs(if one-seat one people, some one should be kicked out of the bus) 이거 이해 잘 안 돼요!

2. You'll get a better view of the animals from the back of the bus.

3. There are no glass in the windows in the bus, so if you stretched out your hand or similar things, it can be dangerous.

4. Please don't stand in the aisle. In case of a sudden stop, it may be dangerous.

5. Please stay seated (for the whole ride).

6. Now we are going to feeding the giraffes. Please don't touch the giraffes and don't yell at them. They might get startled, and then we will have to stop the feeding

7. Please don't use flash when taking pictures.

I want to make a new, interesting expedition scripts in English for you guys. I think I can also tell you interesting stories about my job too. Please help me complete these scripts, and if you can, can you correct this text too? it can get so long ... cause I'm talkactive person. Even if you only correct the above sentences, I will be also sooooooooooo thankful. Thanks!

보통 듣는 사람은 말을 모르면 a라고 쓰고 알면 the라고 써요. 예를 들면 Zoo에 있어서 손님은 기린이 있는지 알 수도 있어서 the라고 쓰면 더 자연스러워 들려요.

그리고 반대면 (in the opposite case), 예를 들어서 제가 누리 씨가 어느 zoo에서 일하는지 (아니면 zoo 아예 일하는지) 몰라서 in a zoo라고 쓰면 되세요.

I work at the zoo.

Hello, I'm Nuri. I have been working for 4 months in the zoo department of a Korean amusement park. My department job title is "expedition leader". By the bus, we show visitors many animals and explain things about them. We also perform a play. In the script setting, amusment visitors are explorers and we're leaders. We go on a expediton to find legendary animals that have disappeared with vast treasure. In this way, we can explain the animals in a more fun way. I love this job that gives interesting animal information and pleasure to children.

But these days, I have a problem. There are many foreign visitors on our ride. In our job manual, if there is at least one Korean person on the bus, we have to explain the animal information in Korean. But if all the people are foreigners, we can use other languages if we can. (In the situation that all the people on the bus are foreigners, we call it "all-in")

So, this "all-in" issue brings me the trouble. I can't explain the animal information fluently in english. I want foreigners to understand what i tell them and to notice when their actions will be dangerous. Can you do me a favor? I want to do my best for all of the people who ride my bus so that they are happy.

First, i want to know what I have to say to stop foreigners from engaging i dangerous actions, and basic ride information. Can you correct these lines in a colloquial style?(and polite , in proper speach to a guest , and simple so that a guest can understand easliy.)

1. Please sit two to a seat so that we can accommodate all of the guests that want to enjoy the tour.

2. The farther back in the bus that you sit, the better your view of the animals will be.

3. Please keep your arms and belongings inside the bus at all times to avoid injury.

4. Don't stand in the aisle. In the event of a sudden stop, it can be dangerous.

5. Please stay seated.

6. Now we are going to feed the giraffes. Do not attempt to touch the animals. Also do not scream please. This will startle the animal.

7. No flash photography please. Please disable your camera's flash.

I want to make a new intersting expedition script in english with you guys. i think i can also tell you interesting stories about my job. Please help me complete these script. and if you can, can you correct this all letter too? it can be so long ... cause I'm talkactive person. if you correcting only above 7 sentance, it also sooooooooooo thanxful. thanks!

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