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Hello! My name is Maude, I am French and I study sciences at high school, and biology in particular. I learn English in school but I have a basic understanding in English. I would like speak and understand English better, so I try to improve it now. I like read, learn about the world and I am interested by the nutrition an diet. Besides, I like research, sciences but also spirituality. I would like to change what I can in the world and at first I try to work on myself. In exchange I am happy to help you with French. Send me a message if you are interested. Maude PS: Tambien estoy aprendiendo espanol, si alguno quiere practicar Frances con migo.
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    Hello! Could you correct me please? Thank you. Always wanted more According to the article “demand is satured” means that in the economy’s the History it is the first time consumers have lost their will and need to overconsumption. That can firstly be explain by the inequalities in the current societies, and between them: the question of the buying power is asking. Besides, more and more consumers ask themself what are the causes of the happiness and raise the issue of the reason of have always more stuff: they search the sense of their acts. Finally, this sentence shows the current upheavals in the society and how that bucked the economists.
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    Always wanted more Hello! Could you correct me please? Thank you. According to the article “demand is satured” means that in the economy’s the History it is the first time consumers have lost their will and need to overconsumption. That can firstly be explain by the inequalities in the current societies, and between them: the question of the buying power is asking. Besides, more and more consumers ask themself what are the causes of the happiness and raise the issue of the reason of have always more stuff: they search the sense of their acts. Finally, this sentence shows the current upheavals in the society and how that bucked the economists.
    January 12, 2020
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    Changer vos habitudes alimentaires

    Chère Anna,

    Merci beaucoup pour votre invitation l'été dernier, <s>et</s> j'ai passé de très <em>(c'est plus cohérent car il y a un point d'exclamation)</em> bonnes vacances chez vous! <s>Mais</s> je trouve cependant <em>(le "mais" fonctionne mais ça fait moins brutal avec le "cependant")</em> que vous vous nourrissez <s>nourrissons</s> souvent de <s>des</s> plats préparés <s>préparées</s>, <s>donc</s> c'est pourquoi <em>(la même chose que juste avant)</em> je voudrais vous donner mes conseils.

    Il est vrai que les plats préparés <s>préparées</s> sont évidemment pratiques. On peut seulement ouvrir l'emballage et placer les produits dans un micro-ondes pour quelques minutes<s>, ensuite, on peut</s> et ensuite profiter de <s>des</s> plats délicieux. Je comprends que vous êtes toujours très occupée, alors se servir de plats préparés <s>prendre le plat préparé</s> <em>(cela se dirait d'avantage)</em> peut augmenter votre efficacité. De plus, comme il y a différents <s>différentes</s> types de plats au <s>dans le</s> supermarché, on peut changer ce qu'on mange chaque jour si l'on veut. <s>C'est exactement une invention qui changer la vie</s>. <em>(On dirait plutot:)</em>
    C'est vraiment une invention qui change la vie!

    Néanmoins, d'après moi, manger <s>les plats préparés fréquent</s> fréquemment des plats préparés peut vous <s>entrainer</s> causer beaucoup de problèmes. D'abord, comme nous ne préparons pas ces plats nous-mêmes <s>les plats ne sont pas préparés par nous-mêmes</s>, nous ne savons pas s'ils contiennent des <s>les </s>additifs alimentaire <s>qui sont</s> dangereux pour la santé. Ensuite, vous dites que vous vous sentez fatiguée et faible à raison du <s>de </s>travail récemment. Il vous faut <s>de</s> faire <s>du shopping et faire</s> des courses et la cuisine vous-même, parce que vous pouvez choisir les aliments de qualité supérieure que vous aimez le plus. Faire la cuisine est également une procédure intéressante et permettant la détente. De plus,<s> il peux vous porter heureux</s> cela peut vous apporter de la joie et de la satisfaction. Vous pouvez aussi acheter des livres <s>lives </s>de recettes et suivre les étapes. Enfin, les emballages <s>packages</s> des plats sont souvent en plastique, <s>qui fait du mal</s> ce qui nuit à l'environnement. Nous savons que le réchauffement climatique <s>est plus sévère qu'avant</s> doit encore plus être pris en compte de nos jours, en raison de la crise climatique actuelle. Chacun d'entre nous <s>est obligatoire de</s> doit obligatoirement faire des actions <s>de</s> pour protéger l'environnement.

    Pour conclure, je comprends qu'il est difficile pour vous de préparer <s>le repas</s> chaque jour le repas, mais, il vaut mieux que vous <s>diminuer</s> diminuiez <s>le</s> la fréquence des plats préparés. Et pour cela je vous propose de commencer à apprendre la cuisine <s>immédiatement</s> dès maintenant!

    Cordialement,
    Jade
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    January 1, 2020
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    Riquezas en Bolivia Riquezas minerales en Bolivia y sus consecuencias para el país Bolivia es el país de América Latina el más pobre, pero es también uno de los que tienen muchas riquezas minerales. Cuales son las riquezas bolivianas? Pero también, cuales son sus consecuencias ? Y las razones de la precariedad economía en Bolivia? Primero, Bolivia tiene muchas riquezas minerales. De hecho, en Bolivia hay minas de oro, de plata, de hierro, de estaño, de zinc, de litio, y también más. Es el segundo mayor productor de zinc de la región, además es muy rico en litio (tiene la mitad de todo el litio mundial). Así, las numerosas minas permiten el desarrollo económico del país gracias a la industrialización. Con los hidrocarburos, las minerales representan 75% de la exportación al extranjero. Sin embrago hay diferentes problemas. Primero, si hay muchos recursos bolivianos, son en mayoría recuperadas por los países ricos desde hace la conquista española, y no para Bolivia. Hoy, Bolivia paga caro por la explotación de sus recursos minerales, por su pobreza y la gran dependencia economía. Luego, muchos trabajadores en las minas son muy jóvenes, en promedio tienen 14 años. Y por eso hay un problema en cuanto a la educación. Sobre todo porque es la educación que permite un mayor desarrollo de un país, porque por ejemplo los ingenieros del país formados en el país pueden trabajar para él y su prosperidad. Por fin, también hay problemas para el entorno. De hecho, en Bolivia, las condiciones de extracción son muy precarias. Hay consecuencias sobre la salud de los trabajadores y sobre un gran parte de la población porque el aire, la tierra y la agua son más y más contaminados. Así, el famoso lago de Titicaca, que permitó a tres millones de bolivianos de tener agua potable, es por ejemplo impactado.
    January 1, 2020
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    The Presence Process
    Hello Everyone!
    Do you know "The Presence Process" by Michael Brown?
    What do you think of this book?
    December 20, 2019
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    Vivre Dans Une Petite Ville

    Pour l Les gens qui vivent dans les grandes villes ne pourront pas croire ce que je vais vous dire. Mais voici c’est à quoi cela ressemble de vivre dans une petite ville.

    La ville dans laquelle je vis s'appelle Creston et se situe dans le sud de la Colombie-Britannique, au Canada. Dans ma ville, il y a environ 7 000 habitants, dont 15 000 environ. C'est très bien pour certaines choses, mais pour d'autres choses comme le shopping ou les restaurants, ce n'est pas très pratique gentil. Ainsi, dans une petite ville, il y a peu de choses, par example seulement quatre restaurants-minute/fast food, ou aucun Canadian Tire.

    Mais après vous avoir exposé les aspects négatifs de la vie dans une petite ville, je vais vous dire les points positifs.
    Pour quelqu'un qui vit dans une grande ville, ce que j'ai dit plus haut peut-être un rêve ou un cauchemar. Mais pour moi, c’est positif pour plusieurs raisons. Par exemple: la merveilleuse ambiance entre les habitants, les magasins locaux sont beaucoup plus personnels et vous connaissez probablement le propriétaire ou l'employé. Mais notre petite ville est également l'un des plus grands producteurs de fruits de l'Ouest canadien. Cela signifie que nous pouvons presque toujours avoir des aliments frais, biologiques et non modifiés. Ce sont les raisons pour lesquelles j'aime vivre dans une petite ville et que j'aimerais savoir ce qu'en pensent les habitants des grandes villes!

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    Discours indirect: Futur simple / Futur antérieur

    Ma mère m'a demandé: "Fera-t-il chaud demain?"
    Ma mère m'a demandé s'il ferait chaud le lendemain.

    Ma petite amie (fiancée, si ils vont se marier) m'a dit: "Nous nous marierons l'année prochaine."
    Ma petite amie m'a dit que nous nous marierions l'année suivante.

    Peter a dit ("raconté" n'est pas vraiment utilisé dans ce contexte avec le temps de la phrase): "Je jouerai au football avec mes amis."
    Peter a dit qu'il jouerait au football avec ses amis.

    Je disais toujours: "J'aurai réussi ça au plus tard demain."
    Je disais toujours que j'aurais réussi ça au plus tard le lendemain.

    Ton frère a affirmé: "Vous aurez perdu votre saison le mois prochain à cette heure."
    Ton frère a affirmé que nous aurions perdu notre saison le mois suivant à cette heure-là.
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    May 16, 2019
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    Mon logement

    Mon nom est Joanna, je suis une jeune fille qui ai de 25 ans.
    Je travaille dans un institut en tant que réceptionniste.
    Je vis avec la famille de mon père (ou Je vis avec ma famille paternelle): ma grand-mère, mon père, mes cousins et mes chats.

    J´ habite a San Martin de Porres, près d´une école publique.
    Le quartier est calme le matin et un peu animé le week-end.
    Ma maison est à deux étages, avec vue le parc.
    Au rez-de-chaussée, il y a trois pièces, qui sont confortables et lumineuses. Par exemple, la salle de séjour est de taille moyenne et de blanche.

    Pour cela le canapé noir est à drate (je ne comprend pas ce que tu veux dire), la table basse n´est quant à elle pas moderne parce que c´est un meuble de famille des générations passées (cela est sous entendu dans ce que tu viens de dire).
    Dans la cuisine, ma famille à un frigo et un placard rectagulaire à gauche.
    Au premier étage on trouve les chambres.
    Aussi, et il y a aussi une grande salle de bains pour toute la famille.
    Le dernier étage est vide, alors en eté on l´utilise comme terasse.


    Bonjour Joanna, à part quelques petites photos (notamment au niveau des accents aigus "é" et grave "è") ton texte et plutôt bon.

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    May 16, 2019
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    Myths and heroes, Route 66 (part2) Hello, can you correct me please? Thank you! → ccl: So, it was thanks to writers, singers and execcutive producers that Route 66 was famous during the 20's century. But since 1985, Route 66 was officially closed and since then it has been possible to drive along just 85% of it. III) Today, Route 66, linked to the American identity -Nowadays the road is more a place for tourism than for cross the USA. Indeed, the singers (like Elvis Presley), the diners next to the road, the chevrolets form a timeless image of the road. Nevertheless this image of Route 66 isn't the reality, but a part of the American dream. -Route 66 representes the idea of liberty, independence and the American recognize themselves in it. -Since the beginning of the 20th century, generations of American have followed the road wich has become famous in novel, song and film. That is why this road form a part of the American identity. Conclusion: -To conclude, we can see that Route 66 became a myth thank's to writers, songs, movies. And It can be considered as a myth because its history is linked to the American culture. -Finally, I think that even if the myths are often derive from the reality, this reality is greatly transformed in the time, but the myths are very useful to creat a common identity between people.
    May 16, 2019
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    Myths and heroes, Route 66 Hello, can you correct my oral presentation please? Thank you! Introduction: -The notion I am going to talk about is « Myths and heroes ». Nevertheless, I choosed to concentrate on the notion of myth. So, the myths are true or false stories using to make our collective identity, universel and belong to the past (transmetted to generation to generation). -To illustrate the notion, I'm going to talk about Route 66 . So, I'm going to answer the question: “To what extent can we say that Route 66 is a myth that is fully part of the American identity?” First, I would like to explain what is the history of this road. Then, we are going to see the beginning of the myrh. Finally, we are going to show the place of Route 66, nowadays, in the Aerican culture. I) A road with a history, linked to the American history -Since 1926, driving down Route 66 has been the experience of a lifetime for travelers and dreamers. This road crosses 8 states from Chicago (Illinois), to Santa Monica (California) and it's 3,600 km long. But isn't a banal/common road because it was appproximatly the same road that during the conquest of the West. -In the 30's the traffic increase on the USA's roads. Indeed, it was the birth of the car culture in the USA, car industries began (especially with Henri Ford), cars became accessible to the population and the country was vast and needed transports. Finally, in the 50's the USA became the world's largest manufacturer of cars. -Besides, it was also the route taken by approximately 200, 000 migrants to fleeing the Dust Bowl of Oklahoma to go to California. → ccl: So, this road had a important place in the 30's-60's, but it wasn't the busiest road to cross the USA. II) Route 66, in novels, musics, movies : the beginning of the myth -The myth really began in 1939, when John Steibeck published his novel “The Grapes of Wrath”. Indeed, he writes about a family who has to move from Oklaoma because of the drought (Dust Bowl) and this family travel on Route 66. Besides, in his novel, he nicknamed the road “The Mother Road” (still a famous nickname nowadays) and he makes Route 66 a destination in itself. -And 20 years later an other writer, Kerouac, use Route 66 like the main place of his novel. -Also, there is a reference to Route 66 in a lot of movies, series, or musics in the 20's century. For example the music “Route66” by Nat King Cole, came out in 1946.
    May 16, 2019
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