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    Anna Karenina

    Please correct my mistakes! Thank you in advance!

    Anna Karenina is a fantastically well written, entertaining, and compelling novel by Leo Tolstoy.

    Anna Karenina has two main plots, the first one is about a passionate relationship between married Anna Karenina and a handsome young man, Vronsky. The second plot is about a simple man, Levin, and his true and only love, Kitty. This book is about a life choice. A choice which may lead to spiritual degradation due to blind passion and a selfish attudite (attitude). Or a choice which may lead to spiritual revival, finding peace in your soul<s>d</s> and pure and innocent love as well.

    In my opinion, Anna is a selfish person who doesn't care about anobody (anybody) but herself. She found her happiness in destructful (destructive) love, (or rather) passion, while Levin found his happiness in kindness. He wanted to be helpful, to make people's life (lives) better. His whole nature is about serving <s>to</s> people, and family values. Honesty and serene love mean a lot to him, unlike Anna Karenina who chooses her own emotions over family values.

    Anna Karenina is a really enjoyable reading experience. You definitely should try it and you will not regret the time spent reading this book.

    Comment - this is really good! There are just some vocabulary issues and some problems with punctuation, especially in the part that I've underlined. We would also probably refer to 'Anna Karenina' as a 'novel' rather than as a 'book'.
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    September 14, 2019
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    Some facts about my childhood

    I was born in a small town in the north of Russia and lived there till I left home and went to Moscow at the age of seventeen. My parents are doctors (just as are my grandparents, uncle, aunt, my cousine and now my brother). Now I understand that to grow up in the a family consisting entirely from of doctors means to be an independent child. My parents always were always very busy. As  When I was five, I already went to kindergarten alone (it still was still quite near to my house). I also learned cooking very early. I don`t mean, of course, that I haven`t seen didn't see/ didn't use to see my parents for days, I still have had wonderful time with my family, especially on the weekends, when we often went skiing. There, in the north, mountain skiing is a very common kind of sport, and there are ski-mountain routes just (quite?) near the town, surrounded with by woods. Now I feel lucky to have been born in a small town and spent my childhood in a touch with nature.
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    October 3, 2018
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    Situations when you disagreed with your friends

    I don't like to argue or to quarrel, but sometimes my friends and I have a different point of vision view.
    When it happens, I try telling my thoughts  (speaking my mind/ saying what I think) and giving arguments that confirm my position. If a friend is stubborn or does not understand me, I calmly, with understanding, listen to his arguments. If the friend was incorrect, he understands this when he can't prove it.
    In this case, everything will end peacefully.
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    October 3, 2018
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    Encounter

    I live in a city with a population of about 10 million. I don't think encounter (meeting by chance) is not easy. But I have been encountered someone (by chance) more than twice.This is a wonderful fate (coincidence).

    *'encounter' = seeing someone you know? meeting by chance?

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    September 26, 2018
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    Could you check a cover letter. Many thanks

    Dear Yulia,
    I am ( I have) interested in the job posting of linkbuilder specialist posted by your company at xxxx.ua.
    I would like to tell you about my experience and the skills I could bring to your company. I graduated from the Lviv Polytechnic University with the a Master's degree in Processing Management, and worked as a file-keeper at transportation company (from xxx to xxx). Despite my main duties, which involved working with data, (working with data), I often represented my company before customers, as well as contractors. Also In addition, I was involved in in the preparation of the documents for participation in tenders. I have experience in creating recruiter documents and presentations, with the aim of training employees. With a list of these diverse skills I want to present myself as can demonstrate that I am a responsible, versatile person who is ready to improve and self-development  develop professionally, not only for my own purposes, but also for employer necessity.
    During my maternity leave, I began to study English and attained an intermediate level in both written and oral forms. Also Furthermore, because of a desire to create and develop a website I started looking and viewing a lot of information about the tools of web marketing tools, that which led me to the thought to try my possibilities in  consider pursuing this direction. I am convinced that my curiosity and enthusiasm will help me quickly to learn new information quickly, and cooperation with a team of specialists will increase my professional skills.
    The interesting topic of site development and promotion has led me to become concerned with the IT sphere, and later I realized what the scale of the work that is done there and how our future is connected with new technologies. Therefore, it would be great  a privilege to share my professional achievements with you and keep pace with the young, ambitious professionals of  in your company.
    I would be very happy to receive your positive response and  love to have the opportunity to become a part of your friendly, large family and look forward to hearing from you shortly. You can contact me at the above email address or by calling +38097///.
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    September 21, 2018
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    Journal #47 Is “man flu” real?

    Some men seem to suffer or complain more than when they get sick than woman (women). (For) many man (men) their illness is real, while many woman say they are just being weak. According to a doctor’s research, testosterone levels and oestrogen levels influence the immune response. The higher the testosterone levels is the lower the immune response, whereas the higher the oestrogen level is the stronger the immune response. Testosterone is higher in males and oestrogen is higher in females. But these results are only suggestive not definitive. Some women feel men is (are) just whining when they get flu.

    I’ve never felt that men complain (about) their illnesses more than women. If the oestrogen levels really influence the immune response, I feel sorry about (for) men. Women sometimes feel bad because of hormone influences, and they want men to understand these (this) painfulness. That is (the) same as man flu. It can't hurt to be considerate to men who get flu. Am I too much kind?
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    September 21, 2018
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