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Journal #47 Is “man flu” real? Some men seem to suffer or complain more than when they get sick than woman. Many man their illness is real, while many woman say they are just being weak. According to a doctor’s research, testosterone levels and oestrogen level influence the immune response. The higher the testosterone levels is the lower the immune response, whereas the higher the oestrogen level is the stronger the immune response. Testosterone is higher in males and oestrogen is higher in females. But these results are only suggestive not definitive. Some women feel men is just whining when they get flu. I’ve never felt that men complain their illness more than women. If the oestrogen levels really influence the immune response, I feel sorry about men. Women sometimes feel bad because of hormone influences, and they want men to understand these painfulness. That is same as man flu. It can't hurt to be considerate to men who get flu. Am I too much kind?

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Journal #47 Is “man flu” real?

Some men seem to suffer or complain more than when they get sick than women.  For many men their illness is real, while many women say they are just being weak. According to a doctor’s research, testosterone levels and oestrogen level influence the immune system. The higher the testosterone level is the lower the immune response will be, whereas the higher the oestrogen level is the stronger the immune response. Testosterone level is higher in males and oestrogen is higher in females. But these results are only suggestive not definitive. (It is empirical results not a definitive theory)  Some women feel men are just whining when they get flu.

I’ve never felt that men complain about their heath more than women. If the oestrogen levels really influence the immune response, I feel sorry about men. Women sometimes feel bad because of hormone influences, and they want men to understand these painfulness. This as to be the explanation for " man flu". It can't hurt to be considerate to men who get flu. Or am I too  kind?


good text, I only added a bit of my way of writing. 

You make me wonder if there are such things as man flu, I personally (as a men) never experience it.  

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Journal #47 Is “man flu” real?

Some men seem to suffer or complain more than when they get sick than woman (women). (For) many man (men) their illness is real, while many woman say they are just being weak. According to a doctor’s research, testosterone levels and oestrogen levels influence the immune response. The higher the testosterone levels is the lower the immune response, whereas the higher the oestrogen level is the stronger the immune response. Testosterone is higher in males and oestrogen is higher in females. But these results are only suggestive not definitive. Some women feel men is (are) just whining when they get flu.

I’ve never felt that men complain (about) their illnesses more than women. If the oestrogen levels really influence the immune response, I feel sorry about (for) men. Women sometimes feel bad because of hormone influences, and they want men to understand these (this) painfulness. That is (the) same as man flu. It can't hurt to be considerate to men who get flu. Am I too much kind?

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