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I grew in the town of about 20 000 people. It is located in Siberia. The most popular profession in my town is miner. There is coul coal in our mines*.
My town is arounded surrounded by hills**. There are many pine-trees. The Hills used to be covered by melon fields, but I didn't see it never saw it.
I like this small and green town, but soon I have to be in another city -- in Novosibirsk.*I would say 'Coal miner is the most popular profession in my town." or "many people in my town are coal miners." Then we know both about the profession, and that there's coal in the mines.
** If you want to use 'around', you could also say 'there are hills around my town'.
0 votedAugust 29, 201814t34yqyq
Different people have different opinions about personal characteristics for their neighbours. Although I think that some characteristics may be common for most of people. In this essay, I try to describe an ideal neighbour.
First of all, I think that your neighbour must be pretty quiet, because very often there are situations when you want to relax or you must to prepare for exams and noise will disturb you. In addition, the noise at the night can annoys you and on the next day you will feel bad. And in contradiction to this*, will it would be great if your neighbour will allow you to listening to music loudly and organize parties. Secondly, your neighbour will** be able to help you with your household, sometimes taking care about of your dog during your business travels. I personally suppose*** that neighbours should help each other, so seldom often we haven't time to do the small work****. Third, the most important thing in order to you can live calmly near adequate your neighbour; He can't have an addiction with to alcohol or any thinks things like drugs.*'In contradiction to this' is okay, but I would say 'on the other hand' to mean the same thing
** I would say either 'your ideal neighbor will be able to...." OR "your neighbor should"
*** 'suppose' is not incorrect, but 'suppose' usually means you are a little unsure- "I think" or "It's my opinion that" are stronger.
**** 'work' is okay, but I would say 'tasks' instead.
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