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4t34yqyq different people nave different opinion about personal characteristic for their neighbours. Although I think that some characteristic may be common for most of people. In this essay I try to describe an ideal neighbour. First of all I think that your neighbour must be pretty quiet, because very often there are situations when you want to relax or you must to prepare for exams and noise will disturb you. in addition the noise at the night can annoys you and on the next day you will feel bad. And in contradiction to this, will be great, if your neighbour will allow you listening music loudly and organize parties. Secondly your neighbour will be able to help you with household, sometimes take care about your dog during your business travels. I personally suppose that neighbours should help each other, so seldom we haven't time to do the small work. Third the most important thing in order to you can live calm near adequate your neighbour. He can't have a addiction with alcohol or any thinks like drugs.

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Different people have different opinions about personal characteristics for their neighbours. Although I think that some characteristics may be common for most of people. In this essay, I try to describe an ideal neighbour.
First of all, I think that your neighbour must be pretty quiet, because very often there are situations when you want to relax or you must to prepare for exams and noise will disturb you. In addition, the noise at the night can annoys you and on the next day you will feel bad. And in contradiction to this*, will it would be great if your neighbour will allow you to listening to music loudly and organize parties. Secondly, your neighbour will** be able to help you with your household, sometimes taking care about of your dog during your business travels. I personally suppose*** that neighbours should help each other, so seldom often we haven't time to do the small work****. Third, the most important thing in order to you can live calmly near adequate your neighbour; He can't have an addiction with to alcohol or any thinks things like drugs.


*'In contradiction to this' is okay, but I would say 'on the other hand' to mean the same thing

** I would say either 'your ideal neighbor will be able to...." OR "your neighbor should"

*** 'suppose' is not incorrect, but 'suppose' usually means you are a little unsure- "I think" or "It's my opinion that" are stronger. 

**** 'work' is okay, but I would say 'tasks' instead.

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different people nave different opinion about personal characteristic for their neighbours. Although I think that some characteristic may be common for most of people. In this essay I try to describe an ideal neighbour.
First of all I think that your neighbour must be pretty quiet, because very often there are situations when you want to relax or you must to prepare for exams and noise will disturb you. in addition the noise at the night can annoys you and on the next day you will feel bad. And in contradiction to this, will be great, if your neighbour will allow you listening music loudly and organize parties. Secondly your neighbour will be able to help you with household, sometimes take care about your dog during your business travels. I personally suppose that neighbours should help each other, so seldom we haven't time to do the small work. Third the most important thing in order to you can live calm near adequate your neighbour. He can't have a addiction with alcohol or any thinks like drugs.

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