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- Hoje em dia, todo mundo está atualizado <strike>no </strike>NA série Jogo dos <strike>Trones </strike>TRONOS (curiosidade: no Brasil as pessoas nem traduzem, chamam a série pelo nome em inglês mesmo) Eu não. Muitas pessoas acham isso triste, porque eu perdi um parte da cultura atual nos EUA e outros países. Na verdade eu concordo com eles, de um lado. As referências <strike>ao </strike>à série (série está no feminino, logo antes do "série" fica "a" e não "ao") estão tão popularES (colocar "es" porque aqui é plural) que parece que <strike>exista </strike>existe um novo idioma dentro do meu, que ainda não consegui entender. Então, como o mundo inteiro já sabe, a última temporada está prestes a sair. Daí eu decidi assistir (com um pouquinho DE influência das minhas amigas da sala.) E aí, sem surpresas, estou viciado. (Soando como um nativo, texto super natural)
A primeira coisa que eu reparei foi a introdução. Eles mostram o "mundo" do Jogo dos trones como se fosse um jogo de tabuleiro, feito de bloquinhos e <strike>pequeno maquinas </strike>pequenas máquinas (pequenAs máquinas, "A" pra deixar "pequenas" no feminino, pra concordar com "máquinas" que é um substantovo feminino) Quem que fez isso merece um <strike>prémio </strike>prêmio. O início estava um pouco lento, muitas personagens e histórias sem uma ligação <strike>obvia </strike>óbvia<strike>.</strike> Mas pouco a pouco, a <strike>historia</strike> história geral formou e se tornou <strike>a uma</strike> maravilhosa. E imagino que eu <strike>for </strike>vou assistir o resto. A última temporada vai sair em abril, e não sei se eu vou conseguir assistir tudo antes disso. Vamos ver então.
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No geral, o texto tá muito bom, soando como um nativo! Só corrigi algumas coisas de acentuação das palavras e de concordância, mas que não influenciam no entendimento do texto. Parabéns!!0 votedFebruary 23, 20191 - Oh, I would prefer to learn structured lessons and vocabulary in a specific context. For example, as he is an adult, you can teach him structured lessons in a job interwiew situation. Vocabulary he can learn in texts, and put the phrase with the new word in a flashcard app to see it frequently.0 votedSeptember 17, 20180
- Alex, thank you for the tips! What is the title of your discussion? I would like to look for it. At the time I would like to learn basic German by myself and look for a teacher after, because I am learning it just for fun. First I need to be fluent in English, and I am working on (and paying for) it.0 votedSeptember 17, 20180
- Describing transportation problems in Brazin can someone please correct this text for me? thank you! Brazil has at about 208 millions of people, living in different kind of cities. These people have to move to all parts to do their activities day by day. But the roads and streets conditions make mobility difficult. One of these problems is the conditions of roads and streets. Most of the roads and streets are in poor condition, with many holes, without signaling and shoulder-strap. It harms freight transport, which moves agricultural products, for example, and other products. Because of roads’ bad conditions, many agricultural products don`t achieve their destiny in correct time, and end up spoiling or late for being exported or sold to another place. Transportation in roads makes agricultural products more expensive, because of its logistics costs. Transporting cargo by roads is more expensive than transporting by train, which could leave much more cargo with a less price. People at cities have to run everyday many kilometers to go to job, spending much time on traffic. Cities don’t offer structure to use alternative ways of transportations. Usually there are no bike paths. When it exists, it’s very unsecure. Public transportations are expensive, offer is very poor, always crowded and take much longer to reach the destination. Then, people prefer to use their own car, spending more money to have more comfort. Big cities has bigger transportation problems, as heavy traffic, many car on streets, and the distance between all places, that makes transportations times longer, lasting less time to do personal things, as stay with family, do something funny or just rest. People from big cities that lives far from job takes up to 5 hours in the way of job, coming and arriving, and because of this they have to wake up much earlier, having less time to rest. Problems in transportation could be decreased by investing in quality of collective ways of transportation, conservation of streets and roads and investing in trains as a way to transport cargo. It would decrease the amount of cars in roads and streets, reduce time of transportation by traffic redution and would get transportation in Brazil safer, cheaper and less polluting.September 16, 201800

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