Just a few minor things: Words can have an impact on our souls regardless of the language that's being used. The beauty of the Korean alphabet has captivated me ever since I first got to know about the Korean language. Real passions never fade away.

Not quite. I would say “What’s your favorite Slayer song?” The possessive would be used in a different situation, such as “what is Slayer’s best song?”

Here’s one possibility: I’m thinking of going fishing. I’ve never done that before. One of my dreams is to catch a fish with my bare hands. Also, I can reflect and enjoy the quiet on this trip.

This is a term from roulette. They chose this expression because Macau is famous for its casinos. It also has the double meaning of red being the color of the Communist Party.

I’m assuming this is from a newspaper. If so, the first example sounds much more natural. However, in conversation you would switch to the past tense and add the article “the” as in the second example. Newspaper writing tends to omit articles, in order to save space.